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onlywithbuttons

Forced Smile

Sep 06, 2011 16:55

Rated: PG-13

Warnings: Kissing ♥, and swearing.

Summary: Ringo is concerned with John and talkes to him about it.

Pairing: John/Ringo

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John sat and stared deeply and thoughtfully at the dull white wall across the room. His eyes shifted back and forth, as if he could see a hidden message. He tended to do this when thoughts flew back and forth ( Read more... )

Comments 10

samberrie September 6 2011, 21:19:10 UTC

John/Ringo isn't usually my thing, seriously.. it's never my thing, but I decided to read this because that's how much I love you. *nods*

This was so sugary and sweet, I like, I like. Don't know what it is about J/R that's usually weird to me, but this wasn't bad at all. C:
By the end I was like b'waaaaah.. *retarded seal clap* Not literally, I'm not that weird, but in my mind that's what I was doing, lol.

I command thee to WRITE. MORE. OFTEN. Cuz yer fab.

onlywithbuttons September 6 2011, 21:46:20 UTC

Aw~ Thanks for reading it, even though you don't like the John/Ringo pairing! And thanks so much for the love that you give me. ♥♥

Actually, I wrote this, like, a year ago. I was going through my writings and I found this, and decided that it would be worthy enough for this site. I'm still not sure if I will continue writing... I haven't written anything for a long time now.

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onlywithbuttons September 7 2011, 13:12:43 UTC

Aw, thanks~! :)

atemu_girl September 7 2011, 03:44:09 UTC

Too cute! Loved it :D

onlywithbuttons September 7 2011, 13:12:29 UTC

Thank you! :)

atemu_girl September 8 2011, 04:28:26 UTC

Not a problem :)

larainefan September 7 2011, 23:23:13 UTC

I quite liked this, Ringo was so sweet to be so worried about John! The lines said by them sounded very in-character too! Glad you posted this! I love how Ringo referred to Nowhere Man as "that Nowhere song, or whatever..." and the way he rolled his eyes when John was trying to be all sarcastic to him. And how John thought it took balls for Ringo to wear all those rings out in public with not a care what others thought.

onlywithbuttons September 8 2011, 12:54:49 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad that you like it! I'm happy that I can have the lads be in character! I'm always so worried about that! :)

dizzy_dooze_dee December 1 2011, 16:47:44 UTC

Oh my god, I loved how you wrote them! <3 They're so in character and it was such a lovely story.

onlywithbuttons December 1 2011, 18:22:50 UTC

Thank you~!! :)