233. {c} [suits] (harvey/donna) circles (2/10?)
circles ; pg-13, language ; 2,945 words ; chapter two ;
harvey/donna ; (donna pov, harvey pov, scottie and rachel present)
an introduction to what should have been; it's a vicious circle and no one can quite get their head straight
a/n: the style for this one is going to be a little different and i'm hoping that it is completely understood
( He just needs to look at her - to become calm, to draw from her strength, to remind him of all of the things they’ve shared over the years. But he can’t keep looking at her and when his gaze drops from her, he realizes that he wants her to be all of the things that she just shouldn’t have to be. Not now. Not ever. )
harvey/donna ; (donna pov, harvey pov, scottie and rachel present)
an introduction to what should have been; it's a vicious circle and no one can quite get their head straight
a/n: the style for this one is going to be a little different and i'm hoping that it is completely understood
( He just needs to look at her - to become calm, to draw from her strength, to remind him of all of the things they’ve shared over the years. But he can’t keep looking at her and when his gaze drops from her, he realizes that he wants her to be all of the things that she just shouldn’t have to be. Not now. Not ever. )
Comments 1
okay.
so 1. i really love this style you're using. i love the description and i love the two dimensions you're writing from. i think it's so interesting examining them from each others perspectives because they think so differently to how they act.
2. i like this mystery. idk. I'm obsessed.
3. and finally, i really hope you keep writing this. it's lovely.
xox
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