Comments | onmyoujium: Fanfic - The Tail of Secrets, Part 2

kikimorra in onmyoujium

Fanfic - The Tail of Secrets, Part 2

Mar 12, 2012 15:00

( Part 2 )

Comments 4

persica_parfume March 12 2012, 22:02:42 UTC

This was fantastic! I'm so happy to see more Hiromasa/Seimei fanfic in this tiny little fandom. You did well capturing Seimei's mysterious nature and Hiromasa's blunt cheerfulness. :) I wouldn't have noticed English is not your first language if you hadn't said.

kikimorra March 13 2012, 05:47:18 UTC

Thanks! 8) I'm glad someone still reads this community =)

kc_anathema March 14 2012, 11:35:42 UTC

A pity this doesn't get more reviews. An excellent fic, simple, straightforward and intriguing--I love Seimei's descent into fox'ness. It's so very clear that it's Seimei at the beginning, and then as the transformation becomes more and more mental, we share Hiromasa's fear that maybe this is the wrong fox, or maybe Seimei can't come back anymore. The explanation at the end that this was indeed a possibility makes the happy ending that much sweeter ( ... )

kikimorra March 14 2012, 12:18:28 UTC

Thank you so much for such a long and detailed review! It's really sweet of you to take the time 8))) I do feel rather proud of myself =) I've been writing fanfics in English for quite some time now, and among those I've finished this one is currently the best, IMHO 8))) Oh, and I'm so glad that you liked the part where Hiromasa thinks the lady is boring, because I was having doubts that episode was convincing 8)