Fullmetal Alchemist / fic / The Hawk's Eye: A Tribute Part 1/?

[onnari]

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Title: The Hawk's Eye: A Tribute Part 1/?
Summary: She trusts that she’ll see the shot through to the best of her ability. She promises she will for every shot she ever takes.
Word Count: 594 words
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: Arakawa owns all!

Comments

[bay115]

Oh, this is very nice! You did Riza's thoughts over her handling a gun very well. Great work! :3

Haha, found this through Tumblr (bayalexison there). I hope you don't mind me adding you as a friend at LJ too! :3

[onnari]

Ah *blushes* thank you! I have not really written fic in so long so when I had this idea for Riza, I really wanted to make sure I did right by her since I can't even think of taking Riza lightly! Glad you approve of my first attempt!

And I absolutely do not mind. I'm glad you added me. I am completely clueless/lost at times still on LJ (like can I get rid of these annoying ads without getting a paid account?), and I know just about no one on here. Always glad to have another friend so I'll add you back!

[clewilan]

Great introspection, and description - do you practice target shooting yourself ? It was really accurate !

[onnari]

Thank you! I have only gone to a shooting range once in my life and many years ago at that, so I wasn't exactly drawing upon real life experience for this. Although thinking about it now, I really do want to go try it out again.