[Fic - Real Madrid] Can't Let Go

[onyxexistance]

Title:  Can't Let Go
Fandom/Pairing: Real Madrid - Mesut Özil/Sergio Ramos
Rating: PG-13
Author: onyxexistance/openmoments
Spoilers: --
Word Count: 7, 092 (3, 226 here)
Summary: 
“You do remember that you have your own house, right?” Sergio asks as Mesut walks in through the back doors, not bothering to knock. “And that it is right next door.”
Disclaimers: Do not own/not mine/

Comments

[sashay_away]

dndv bxcjjxxkz
i had a word document for all the things that i liked about this fic (quotes and such) but then i realised that it was practically the entire fic, so.

i really, really loved this fic and mesut would be the best boyfriend ever, even though he wouldn't know how to cook but can you imagine the perpetual cuteness and accidental hotness thing he does. also sergio.

and i loved this:
"He makes it to practice just in time, jogs on to the field as Mou barks out, asking after Sergio and frowns, mutters something about how this team is just trying to kill him, after all he’s done for it and then just glares Cris into silence after he makes a comment about how they’re killing him with love and good football skills."

lololol cris would.

and reading!sergio is 100% hotter than normal sergio. js.

this is just what i needed after half a week of shouting at random moments about how much "i hate this team and [multiple expletives].

[onyxexistance]

Best first comment to receive. EVER. Thank you. :3

I think Sergio secretly loves cooking for him all the time. And there's always the fact that he can try teaching Mesut how to cook. ;)

Cris does what he wants. :p

DKFKJDF. OMFG IKR? I want evidence that this exists. THAT IS ALL I WAANT!

Awwww. I'm glad. And hopefully you're feeling better now after that game today! :D

[sashay_away]

[openmoments]

SOBS. Someone needs to rectify that ASAP. Because Sergio + a book = my new otp. :p

[tragedyofempty]

This is soooo sweet! Oh my gosh I love them and the way they just flow into something more than they are. Happy thoughts abound. And Iker and Sami are perfect. And Cris does have a big mouth with Pepe and Marcelo, for sure.

[onyxexistance]

Sergio and Mesut living next to each other can only produce one result!

Thank you for your kind words and for reading and leaving a comment!

[darkensunrise]

Ahh you wrote it! Sergio/Mesut just isn't written enough and they should because they are so adorable together. I absolutely loved this. You made the relationship and the feelings between them really believable. I hope you write them more in the future!

[onyxexistance]

Actually, on my list is still a follow up to the birthday!fic. Because I need C/M/S in my life like whoa. BUT I AM GETTING THERE! :)

I'm glad you liked this though. They'd be so ridiculously adorable. Just ridiculous. :3 I love them sfm. Awww, thank you for such lovely compliments. They mean so much!

I have a feeling there'll be more Serzil in my future. ;)

[cagedlight]

These are a few of my favourite things:

1. Sami. I've waxed lyrical about how much I love how you write Sami and will do so again. You do this weird thing of writing Sami exactly how I have him in my head. It's weird and like I envy it because I can't do it but you can. He's just steady and reliable and just get things done and pushes Mesut in the right direction because lbr someone has to.

2. Reading!Sergio. Omg.

3. I like the feel of this, like the domesticity of it all, and just how easy it is. There is no like big drama, you know, the big reveal isn't some harrowing thing but just "oh hai, i like you". Basically, there is no angst and I love it.

4. awkward!Mesut is my favourite Mesut after dominate!Mesut because I just want to ruffle his hair and laugh at him in equal measures.

5. "He can’t read the look on Sergio’s face, it’s one he’s never seen before. Half way between amused and confused and maybe...maybe a little bit sad. "This made me sadface not because Sergio was sad but because he knows Mesut is lying to him and

[onyxexistance]

For some reason I'm always surprised when you comment. And I don't know why.

1. Awww. I'm blushing. I'm always worried that I make Sami too...idk. Dull or something. Then again, I didn't want to make him too ~involved, because then I'd be teasing you with Samsut and you'd sadface me. And Mesut would never do anything if Sami wasn't pushing him, lbh.

2. I want photographic evidence of this. Now.

3. I feel like not having angst is something to celebrate because there is always angst. (Actually, I think that's being switched to 'there's always porn' now.)

4. I seriously need more dominant!Mesut in my life. But, awkward!Mesut is so the one we see on a regular basis. #Ilikethatshit

5. Awwww. :3 But then Mesut put on his big boy pants and erased that SO ALL GOOD!

[titania_torres]

this was so cute. how easy and comfortable they are with each other and all the teasing. and then when mesut freaks out and avoids sergio but can't resist wearing his pants still. and how people slowly find out hahah cris was never going to keep quiet haha lovely piece!

[onyxexistance]

Thank you so much for your kind words, and for reading. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.