[Fic] The Simple Life - Chapter 18

[ookameoo]

Author: Me >w<

Pairing: Akame / Takizawa Hideaki/Kame (for now)

Rating: NC - 17

Genre: Romance, Humour, Action (Violence)

Disclaimer : The story is inspired from the drama Last Friends(just a little).

Summary: Everyone always tries to hide his true personality. When someone is vulnerable it’s better to wear a mask, to play and overplay, just to prove

Comments

[anthonny]

thank you

[roro_ieda]

wahhh, akame trip to tokyo!!! so far, the plot is going smoothly. actually, i'm a lil bit nervous about "the storm" you have talked about.
anyway, akame interactions focus is totally okay!!!! lol.

thank you for the update. ^__^

[ookameoo]

thank you for commenting!

I know i'm late but i'm packed with work *pouts*

gomen gomen!!!

will be working on an update for you guys!

[hilly_katara]

Thanks for update and resolve the mess between Kame and Jin !!!
Good thing Kame talk about the matter with Jin, the couples can sometimes be stupid to keep quiet about what ails them, typical in a dating relationship.
At least have a break from Tackey, the evil Takky I love.
I'm waiting to read as friends of Jin and Kazuya will have fun, that guy should leave the farm that so much asphyxiated with problems, a new environment.
it is good that you've given a change of environment.

[ookameoo]

Yeah I can't let them mad at each other for too long! hehe

Takki is the devil but we love him <3

I needed to get out of the farm I guess lol thx for commenting!

Will try to post as soon as possible !

[marlenem]

So heart wrenching! I read the whole fic in one go, I got completely hooked. I love the way you portray Kame, the struggles he has to keep up a strong face and personality, to protect himself and all things that are important to him. He's completely ruined right now, but I still feel the hope inside him, and I desperately wish for a happier ending for him. That cheerful and naive Jin you have here is his complete opposite, but they fit together so nicely :)

I'd love to read this story to the very end, so I hope you'll be able to finish it :) I'm not pushing though, I'm the perfect example of a writer who takes her time to finish something If you didn't comment on my fic, I'd have never found yours, so... thank you! :)

[ookameoo]

oh thanks for leaving such a nice comment !
I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah Kame has a lot on his mind. His relationship is everything but what he wantd it to be. I don't completely hate on Takki tho, because ruining Kame is his way of keeping him close, and yeah, Jin is naive but he can be really scary lol
He looks like the I-don't-know-what-i'm-doing-here kinda guy, yet he's the really strong type!

I will finish it, and it's gonna take the time it needs, but I will.

It's always good to get an opinion on my works so thank you again! ^^

[marlenem]

I hope to see more of Takki to understand how he turned out this way. Kame is your main character, but Takki is pretty screwed up as well... I want to know how he ended up this way :D Sorry I'm making demands hehe. Jin too. I love stories where every character, no matter how big or small their roles are, have their personalities properly developed. You do such a good job at that.

And I'll be patiently waiting for that time to come :)

As a writer myself, I know how important it is to give relevant opinion to a fellow author. I know I appreciate the insight my readers leave for me :)

[ookameoo]

Takki is hard to deal with. Sometimes I feel like I created a monster, even I can't handle following on this crazy character lol It's okay to make demands! It really helps me going to the right direction because sometimes, I doubt I'm even writing something worth reading xD It's so dramatic.

Yeah Jin's story is gonna be hell to deal with too lol I want to show more of his past and fears ;)
As for Kame, he's gonna change with time I think !
This triangle is hard to put together, and as you can see, I barely wrote any scene with the 3 of them.
Thx for saying such nice things !

Yes yes, i'll try not to take too much time!

Relevant comments are food to the writer. That's why i'm doing my best commenting and explaining what I liked/disliked. It's stimulating!