The Shadow Of Love chapter 10

[oorlewende]

Title: The Shadow Of Love
Author: oorlewende
Beta: tat_fan_luv  (You're great! Thanks for all help)
Pairings: TaNaka, JunDa, AKame
Genre: Romance, AU, Smut
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All I own is the story...
Summary: Ueda and Junno are making dinner for Koki and Yuichi, in all of a sudden two more people comes for dinner and at the end of the night two burning hearts decides

Comments

[nikkimattei]

This was a great chapter and the smut *waves hand in front of flushed face* WOAH!! And can I just say that Koki is so adorably cute in the way he declares his love. I love fluff <3

Thanks for the update!

[oorlewende]

Yes! I really wanted Koki to be that "fluffy" kind of lover, as I actually believe he could be ^^ Thank you for reading and commenting!!!

[tat_fan_luv]

thank you so much for giving me the credit although you did most of the work coming up with the chapter. I will say it wasn't easy retyping most of that but the one part I only touched up a little on was the love scene, that was all you. Once you get chapter 11 written send it my way and I'll make the adjustments on it too...

From a fan's pov I loved the chapter and loved how often you made Yuichi blush and how caring koki was towards him. and Jin being quite while Kame was so lively...it just fits.

Also I thought for a few moments Uepi was starting to develop a fie second crush on Jin...careful Junno lol.

[oorlewende]

Nothing to thank for, you were an amazing help and I will send my next chapter as soon I'm done with it. Thanks again for helping me!!!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yuichi blushing + Koki caring = Lovely <3 ^^

About Jin and Kame, I have to be honest, I'm not so into AKame but I just found it perfect for them. Glad you liked it ^^

About Ueda and his crush on Jin, well... I'll just keep quiet about that...

[lifeless23]

I can imagine Koki like the clingy kind of boyfriend! Fall in love with this chapter, good job!
I'll be waiting for the next update!

[oorlewende]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! I'll work hard for the next update ^^

[granity20]

sweet TaNaka and the other pairs!!!!!

[oorlewende]

They're really sweet! ^^
Thank you for reading!