rubber ducky [oneshot]

Aug 07, 2011 08:06

rubber ducky, you're the one
jinyoung x junghwan , romance / humor , pg-13 , 2059w
in which junghwan is unsure.

a/n: while i busily debate to myself just what my otp is, jindeul for the lovely flusteredmess ! first b1a4 fic haha.

junghwan looks up from the floor and spots jinyoung, who looks a bit funny upside down, though that smile of his is still pretty much unmistakable. )

rating: pg-13, -b1a4, !fanfic, @oneshot, pairing: jinyoung/junghwan

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flusteredmess August 9 2011, 13:52:38 UTC
angie angie ANGIE ;__________; oh god i don't even know where to begin this entire fic was so perfect in every single way i'm just a gushing mess rn ;~~~~; the fact that one of my favorite shinee fic writers of all time actually wrote my b1a4 otp........ oh this is just too good to be reality ;A; ♡

no seriously where do i even begin ;o; EVERYTHING IS SO QUOTABLE LMFAO god im so lame askfljaslf

"oh, sorry, that's mine," jinyoung says, shamelessly. he gets up from the couch and smiles, even though sunwoo and chansik are slowly turning red in the face as they try to hold in their laughter. "i'm gonna take a shower now. junghwan, want to join me?"

junghwan, who was sitting in front of the fixated fan with his mouth open and singing random songs, whips his head around. "huh?"
I LOVED THIS ENTIRE SECTION OK. LIKE. JINYOUNG NOT BEING EMBARRASSED THAT HE STILL USES A RUBBER DUCK. AND ASKING SANDEUL TO JOIN HIM AUGHUGAUGHG. also i love how sandeul is being his stupid usual self sob wihlt!! ㅠㅠ

junghwan doesn't understand. the way ( ... )

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flusteredmess August 9 2011, 15:02:30 UTC
ps: i love the baro/gongchan interactions here *____* <333 you should write gongbar too kekeke

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jeogi August 13 2011, 22:46:27 UTC
yssa yssa YSSA omg ㅠㅠ gonna cry ilu and this comment!! wae
LMAO nc-17 cut....how did u kno....shifty eyes
just kidding i can't write smut for my life anyway ㅠ but u can imagine it!! ㅋㅋㅋ

omg but i love your rambly long comment it made me smile ㅎㅎㅎ i am glad it made your day/week sob ㅠ clings back ;w; i'm glad you enjoyed it ㅎㅎ ♡

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tsunagatte August 9 2011, 17:20:02 UTC
THIS. IS SO CUTE.
OMG I was dying from laughter the entire time this is adorble! I'd quote lines, except I'd be quoting the whole thing so :P but you totally need to write more!

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jeogi August 13 2011, 22:32:50 UTC
ahh haha thank you so much!! i'm glad to know you liked it :') i'll try! thank you for reading ♡

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jeogi August 31 2011, 15:12:04 UTC
omg late reply ㅠ lmao thank you so much!! i'm glad you think so ㅎㅎ ;u; thank you for reading dear~

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dustyfairy August 22 2011, 20:37:23 UTC
;o; omg this is so- i mean, it's- ..../incoherent/
I LOVED IT Q___Q /crying tears of joy/ i loved jinyoung's characterization and junghwan-omg you adorable man, you- why was he so damn cute?

junghwan, who was sitting in front of the fixated fan with his mouth open and singing random songs, whips his head around. "huh?" squealing. cuteness. overload. ohmagash ;__; i want him...

excuse the over flailing, i just haven't read such a good JinDeul in a long time \o/ thank youuuuu♥ it was very wonderfully written C:

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jeogi August 31 2011, 15:13:19 UTC
oh my goodness, sorry for the late reply!
bahh thank you so much haha ㅠㅠ junghwan is just too cute~

ohhh gee ㅠㅠ well i'm glad you enjoyed it! thank you very very much for reading ♡

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potaoto September 25 2011, 07:17:35 UTC
lmao this is me being late but oh well~~

since i've finally, finally gotten into b1a4 as a group (took me long enough omg i've been missing out) and i was like "oh didn't angie write bilasa fic a while ago....", here i am!! cries i love how flustered sandeul gets around jinyoung wae so cute ;o;! also this:
"i'm always here for you, junghwan." and the words roll of jinyoung's tongue so smoothly, so well, as if he's been practicing them in front of the mirror as well, or as if he's been dying to say those words for so long.
do you know

how hard i smiled at that

and my stomach did this sort of flippy thing idk SORRY I AM SUCH A SAP ;; also i love how ~chill CNU was throughout this entire thing lol and okay this:
but even after the series of checkups from doctor dongwoo
screams softly i kind of ship sandeul/cnu okay :( :( :( my shipping goggles are never off. ever. and then gongchan and baro in the background being mean to sandeul and just existing adorably kjfhdsfjd

I JUST REALLY LIKE THIS :( you should write b1a4/shinee xover who ( ... )

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