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insurance cards at ready [oneshot]

Jul 24, 2010 21:38

Title: insurance cards at ready (quick, because my heart's dying)
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Onew x Taemin
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2398
Summary: in which taemin feels the decline in their relationship and wonders if he can fix it.

a/n: uh i was watching the suite life on deck (ok my sister had it on don't look at me like ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: onew/taemin, !fanfic, @oneshot

Comments 41

soasian101 July 25 2010, 20:27:50 UTC

;______; Heartbreaaaak.

salted_taiyaki July 26 2010, 12:00:01 UTC

b-b-b-but they're together in the end??

ikui July 25 2010, 22:08:34 UTC

I was ready to scream at you. very loudly. very rudely. and very angrily.

But you fixed things. So I love you. :)

salted_taiyaki July 26 2010, 11:59:30 UTC

HAHA i saw your username and went "ohhhh shit"

sob yes i did /cowers

lifeinaphantasy July 25 2010, 22:11:37 UTC

This was GORGOUES!!!!
Absolutely beautiful!!
I almost wanted to cry in the middle
when Taemin was telling Jinki that
he couldn't take it anymore. And even
before then, the way that Taemin
kept trying to suggest things for them
to do together and how Jinki kept shrugging it off. Ah, this was absolutely beautiful!!!
You did such a fantastic job with this!!
I loved it!! And I'm really happy that
they were able to fix their relationship in the end. Totally memming this!!! :D

salted_taiyaki July 26 2010, 11:58:04 UTC

thank you very much haha
ahaaa that was just taemin being really overdramatic haha.
thank you! :)

fluffyxcloud July 25 2010, 23:11:32 UTC

aaaah, seriously so beautiful! But it made me sad and my brow furrowed and I kinda stared at my laptop going 'no, you are so not breaking up, I will it so!!' heehee

I'm glad things ended with a positive note! I was so sad when I thought taemin was going to leave. I was a tad confused in between 'goodbye' and taemin biting his nails, but I oriented myself after a second ^.^

at first I was like, "is taemin in his own apartment?!?!?!" but then I was happy.

thanks for such a pretty fic! I really enjoyed reading it!

salted_taiyaki July 26 2010, 11:57:18 UTC

aha thank you :) yup, i told my fingers not to break them up too haha

aha sorry for the confusion but i'm glad you got it near the end!
ohhh haha going back and reading it, yeah, it might've had that connotation.

thank you very much for reading and enjoying and commenting! :)

volatileflame July 26 2010, 00:57:01 UTC

so good X3

salted_taiyaki July 26 2010, 11:53:27 UTC

ty :)