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drawstrings [oneshot]

Aug 16, 2010 21:56

Title: drawstrings
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Onew x Jonghyun x Key
Genre: Romance, Smut?
Rating: R
Word Count: 1917
Summary: jinki's got it all under control (or, he assumes).

a/n: i suck. ofc when i say smut it never really is smut.

( and, oh, the look of pure something, a mishmash of confusion, shock, fear, and the ever-prevailing lust, yes )

!fanfic, rating: r, pairing: onew/jonghyun/key, @oneshot

Comments 26

crystalshawol August 30 2010, 01:35:00 UTC

So My friend linked me to this because i ship OnJongKey so hard it's kind of rediculous and i must say i am sooo incrediably grateful to her for it cause this was. It was soo refreshing because *blush* I thought i might have been alone in liking this kind of scenario between the three of them. This was wondeful and i totally got your hinting at Onew wanting to dominate but i guess not failing but not suceeding in the way he wanted to. It all played out so nicely in my head. I'm looking forward to reading more of your lovely works cause well... you made me a fan hun <3

roseminty September 24 2010, 06:13:20 UTC

Yes. Yes. And more yes.
I love this.
That's all I have to say.

eijifujiryoma September 29 2010, 19:57:52 UTC

/stands in front of air conditioner

Yes, that's a good thing. *-*

jinkibumiminho December 22 2010, 04:18:45 UTC

Daaayuuuummm! I'd never pictured this before, now it's burned into my eyes! Hot, hot, hot. I love a little naughty!Jinki now and then.