extracurriculars [1/4]

[salted_taiyaki]

Title: extracurriculars
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Jonghyun x Key [Onew x Taemin, Jonghyun x Onew, Minho x Taemin]
Genre: Romance, Fluff, AU
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2986
Summary: in which all five boys are in different clubs and meet in one way or another ;  in this, kibum sews and jonghyun breathes soccer.

a/n: wanted to write...cute stuff.

Comments

[queen_anything]

needless to say, it's a bit one-sided right now.

Your Key is amazing. <3

"hyung, you-ah, ow, jinki! turn off the flash!"

"s-sorry."

You are the only one who can make me appreciate Ontae.!

"sorry," kibum mumbles and then gets up to his feet and runs down the hallway to the school entrance.

I feel you all too well here, bb ~ ;_;

kibum has to tell his feet to stay planted on the ground lest he slip up and fall head over heels for jonghyun again.

WAY TOO CUTE! *o*

I'm really glad the fic developed into this ~ ! It's seriously so good. <3 The ending is just the rgiht amount of sweet (I have a high tolerence though ;)) & the Ontae was just te icing on the beautiful Jongkey cake. ^___^
Can't wait for more ~ <3

[salted_taiyaki]

well i'm glad i make you appreciate ontae teehee it always makes me happy to know when people start liking ontae~~

thank you very much hee ♥

[clbeebop]

awwwwwh so cute!! I Love this! :) LOL @ the ontae love <3 so adorable. Oh I can't wait for the next parts :D

[salted_taiyaki]

thank you very much! haha yup the not-so-subtle ontea ♥

[silentdreamer95]

gaahh. SO CUTE *______*

jinki looks up and kibum and gives him an endearing smile.
aww. your Jinki is so precious :)

jokwon has a bone-chilling glare that slices him up whenever he saunters by and it's all for a stupid role in the school play that no one watches (actors are so pretentious sometimes).
I can SO imagine Kwon doing this.

kibum has to tell his feet to stay planted on the ground lest he slip up and fall head over heels for jonghyun again.
agrees with ^ that this line is SO CUTE.

I would quote more but i think i'd end up quoting the whole fic >< i actually think your fic wouldn't have been as good as a drabble because your characters are all so perfect and presh and idek. gaah speechless right now.
can't wait for the others. esp since i see you've got a Jongyu one lined up :D

[salted_taiyaki]

haha thank you very much~

yeah i was like "oh god who do i use jokwon okay"

thank you hee

[mei_zi]

LKSDKJLJLS so is this a little series of after-school romances or something? 8D

yes. kim jonghyun is a different story. kim jonghyun, co-captain of the soccer team with choi minho, the most handsome boy of their school with the most dazzling voice, yes, kim jonghyun.

omg gorgeous sweet amazing description ♥

he slides the door open with a finger and prances through the entrance, catching the attention of all his friends. taemin immediately asks "what happened?" but the words don't even reach kibum's ears as he sings above him, "new project." he rushes to his stool and sunny watches in amazement, the flying fingers and spinning thread.

LOL KEY you hopeless romantic you~

taemin giving him two big thumbs ups and jinki adoring taemin but also throwing him a bright smile of congratulations.your ninja ontae is so adorable jsyk

[salted_taiyaki]

YUUUUP precisely haha

my ninja but not really ninja because ontae is my bias ontae? oh yes ty ♥♥♥

hope i won't disappoint *w*
..they prob will AHAH

[light_batter]

Gah I love how both your Jjong and Key are just right esp. how Key isn't overly diva-ish but his inherent qualities just peek through, so subtly weaved in your writing .

Anyhow this is so cute ahaha and fluffyyy ~ I shall look forward to the next chappie <3

[salted_taiyaki]

thank you very much ; ; i love when people say that they like the characterizations, always makes my heart flutter~~

thank you, really ♥