crash and burn [oneshot]

[salted_taiyaki]

Title: crash and burn
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Jonghyun x Onew
Genre: Romance, Humor, AU
Rating: R (language, sex)
Word Count: ~4800
Summary: in which jonghyun admits his addiction and jinki only acts as the saint. sequel to however-you-want-it.

a/n: kinamona wanted a smut sequel "involving coffee and lips wrapping around straws and whip cream" but

Comments

[g_odalisque13]

there is not enough jongyu in the world. at all. so i was ecstatic when i saw this!
the whole story was just perfect. poor frustrated Jonghyun with his not-as-innocent-as-he-thought Jinki. lol.
their interactions were adorable and the smut was hot and sweet at the same time.
plus, i loved Jonghyun and Key's arguement at the beginning. absolutely hilarious ♥ i can see Key as a disgruntled Starbucks worker. haha.
awesome job! thanks so much for writing this!
memming!

[salted_taiyaki]

tell me about! we need more jongyu in this fandom~ sigh
thank you so very much for your comment ♥

[jongmalai]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Okay
Yeah
It's official, I kind of stan you jsyk.
I love how cute it was, and a little bit awkward and still sweet and amazing, and just the perfect cherry on top to the previous portion. <3

[salted_taiyaki]

aha you are so sweet ; ; thank you very much!

[boogie14]

spot

[queen_anything]

"jinki, i want to fuck you (because he's really great with words),"

/dreamy sigh You are just as perverted as I am! ^___^

yes, jonghyun admits to his pillow, he is obsessed with his saint of a boyfriend

This is the cutest image in the world & so perfect!

"you try getting off every night with only the image of those lips smiling at you. it starts to hurt a lot, kibum." he grabs the boy by the collar of his black shirt and he keens, "a lot."

Okay, so Jonghyun and Kibum's friendship in this is just perfection. They're so hilarious and so them and it's the best. :3 & this line? You are pure genius, girl!

and secretly tangles his fingers with jonghyun's.

My heart can't handle such adorable-ness! ;___; Omg, why is he so qt?! (& because we're learning about 'interrupted readings' in English class right now, I'm going to guess Jinki isn't as innocent as Jonghyun believes? ;D)

jonghyun wishes he had a car to run himself over with.LOL I love how you write Jjong ~ I'm pretty much just going to quote this whole fic back to you

[salted_taiyaki]

tear i should not even be writing smut haha

i hope all your problems go away completely! my writing can't do that magic, sadly sigh
thank you so much ;__;♥

[queen_anything]

lol no, no, you definitely shuld! ^___^

It almost feels like that when I read your writing! :3 Your writing is magic ~
No prob, bb. <3

[satoshiice]

dude. dude. DUDE!!! This was really really hot 0.0 I seriosuly love sexually frustrated jonghyun and teasing jinki!! This was completely amazing and I actually really liked the ending....it was very well written XD

[salted_taiyaki]

thank you very much for your kind words! :)