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drops of jupiter [2/3]

Oct 16, 2010 13:40

Title: drops of jupiter
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Jonghyun x Onew
Genre: Romance, Fantasy, AU
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3349
Summary: onew is a star who happens to fall into jonghyun's lap one day, quite literally.

chapter one |

a/n: oh my god finally. btw i gave jonghyun's sister the name jonghee b/c i don't...know what her name is l o l

( Jonghyun slowly opens his eyes and sees the ceiling (his eyes don't want to stray and possibly land on a naked Onew again), warped and spinning. )

@multi, rating: pg-13, pairing: jonghyun/onew, !fanfic

Comments 35

fluffyxcloud October 16 2010, 18:02:31 UTC

AHAHAHA~ Oh onew, of course that would happen with you! kekeke, Omo, I'm so excited you decided to finish this fic! Onew as a star is the most adorable thing ever ^.^

And I'm also really happy to see you posting! I missed reading your stuff! This is cute (love that Jjong's sister has a crush on onew)

salted_taiyaki November 14 2010, 05:00:41 UTC

haha thank you, i'm glad you've taken a liking to it! :)

queen_anything October 16 2010, 20:33:27 UTC

Spot ~

queen_anything October 17 2010, 17:04:50 UTC

I normally do quotes - but this chapter was so adorable and perfect I'd have to quote the entirity of it back at you. You really are too hard on yourself, just look and see how brilliant this is! ;)

I'm really excited for the next part. <3
& I love the interactions between Jonghyun and his family!

salted_taiyaki November 14 2010, 05:01:22 UTC

haha this is such an old comment but i never replied ty luv ♥

stjoan4eva October 16 2010, 22:06:48 UTC

This is cup of hot cocoa on a cold night warm bunny slippers and good song on the radio good. ^_^

Star!Onew is the absolute cutest, and I love the dynamic he and Jjong share. <333

Looking forward to the next chapter!

salted_taiyaki November 14 2010, 05:01:46 UTC

aww that's such a sweet image ty i'm glad you think it's good! :)

gigantic3dream October 16 2010, 22:30:03 UTC

"How am I supposed to get down?"

Jonghyun gives Onew a second to panic before he throws his notebook at the star, narrowly missing it and hitting his parents' window instead.

The two go to sleep with Onew locked up in the walk-in closet and Jonghyun wrapped up in bandages.

puahahahahahahahhah i fell out my seat when i read that..
awww i love onew condition~~

thank you writing this fanfic! i hope you continue writing it ^^

salted_taiyaki November 14 2010, 05:02:04 UTC

thank you very much! i will haha :)

silentdreamer95 October 16 2010, 23:19:23 UTC

aww star!onew is adorable and i love the Jjong and Jonghee dynamics.
loving this angie <3

salted_taiyaki November 14 2010, 05:02:18 UTC

haha thank you very much~~