Disney Laced Profanity: Chapter Three (Rachel/Puck)

[ophelia1234]

*I want to take a minute to give credit where credit is due. I realized yesterday that I owe some serious inspiration credit in regards to the structure of this story. If you haven’t read “Easy Girl” by 

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[burntotears]

Hmm, I don't think I've read "Easy Girl." Do you have a link cos I didn't see it in her journal under "fanfiction" tag but then again she might not have tagged it.

I must read it after I read this!

[burntotears]

Only a pansy would tell her that, though, so instead he reaches for a throw pillow and whacks her (softly) in the face.

This line throws me back to the Rachel trying to punch Puck on the shoulder bit, because its like his attempt at not being a boyfriend toward her, which is hi-larious.

Is this what it feels like to send your man off to battle?

Chyeah! In fact I intend to write jealous-possessive Puck fic where he kicks every dudes ass he sees because they LOOK at Rachel. Because wtf do they think they are doing just because they have eyes???

- Awww ok so I was kinda expecting Puck to be fucking with the dude and after laughing with him for a while was gonna randomly wail on his face since the guy was caught off guard. But I suppose this is my brain enjoying randomly-possessive Puck all the time.

Also what was the butter referring to?

[ophelia1234]

LOL

It is a shout out to a lyric it in "Don't Rain on My Parade".

I have gotten several comments about people being annoyed that Puck didn't kick the guy's ass....but I felt it was funnier (and more realistic?) to have him bond with the jackass. He IS still more Puck and Noah. :-)

(I know you can find Easy Girl on fanfiction.net. I think her author name on there is une fille. There is a sequel to it as well-- and the stories KICK MY ASS. LOVE them.)

[burntotears]

I assumed as such. I was going to go look up the lyrics, but I was too lazy to do so. So I figured I'd ask and be sure.

Oh yes, I do totally agree that it is more realistic. Obviously in my head I want him to kick the dude's ass just because its my sick head, but you are staying true to his character and it is good despite my sad mind.

Awesome thanks! I shall check it out ASAP!

[phantom_queen]

I'm impressed you, have totally captured both Rachel and Puck perfectly right down to their speech patterns.

Excellent, job I'm really enjoying this fic/series.

[ophelia1234]

Thank you SO MUCH. I really, really appreciate the encouragement!

Also? Have I mentioned how much I love your pic? :-) (Did you catch the little shout out to Dean in Chapter Two? I was totally channeling him when I whipped out the "sweetheart". LOL)

[une_fille]

many classic songs have taught Rachel to firmly believe that every cloud has a silver lining (his silver lining, by the way, is not a small one)

I think Puck would agree with this sentiment lol

I'm glad Puck's not losing his edge. And seriously, Steve might be my new hero. The dedication & creativity he's putting into this... it's almost admirable?

Can't wait for the next one!

Thanks for the shout-out :)

[ophelia1234]

Thanks for the inspiration! :-)

I'm glad that you like that Puck kept his edge (I think I've angered some shippers at fanfiction.net! LOL)... I just couldn't see him NOT finding that hilarious.

[lunamystik]

Loved the twist - Puck laughing it up with Douche Bag.