Two Points For Honesty (Puck)

[ophelia1234]

 I don't really know how this fic appeared. I was minding my own business listening to some music, and before I knew it-- Puck had invaded my head. This is a one shot. You could consider it a prequel to Disney Laced Profanity, but you don't have to have read that for this to make sense.

Credit for the song lyrics and story title go to Guster (love

Comments

[___agentorange]

No, you can't leave us in suspense like that! What does he type back!

PS. There are some minor spelling issues, like the one in the second paragraph. It should be medal, not metal.

Other than that, I liked it :)

[ophelia1234]

LOL

Thank you for pointing that out. Yeesh. (Please feel free to point out all errors as this was obviously unbetaed!)

Off to fix it now!

[___agentorange]

ah i'm sorry :( i just know some people are anal about spelling, like me!

[ophelia1234]

As an English Major, I should be seriously ashamed of myself. :-)

[radianttragedy]

I have been reading your fic "Disney-Laced Profanity" but felt too shy to comment but the sheer brilliance of this character piece forced me to break out of my shell.

Puck's nicknames for people on his phone...BEST THING EVER.
PSYCHO for Rachel and VirginMary for Quinn...I literally laughed out loud at both of these.

Your Puck voice is spot on. I could hear his (sexy, oh so sexy) voice in my mind as I read this fic.

Rachel was also perfect. The way that she immediately demanded a musical was hilarious and her texts were just so Rachel Berry.

I chuckled at this: Puck has to smile a little bit about how the character limit keeps cutting her off. (Apparently AT&T has been able to accomplish what no one else has in 16 years.)

This was fantastic and I can't wait to read more from you.

[ophelia1234]

Thank you SO MUCH!! I'm so glad you finally commented (And not just because I am total comment junkie).

I really, really appreciate the kind words. VERY encouraging to say the least.

[burntotears]

AWESOME! Plus Puck has awesome names for people in his cell phone. Rock on.

Very interesting and entertaining insights. Thanks for sharing with us. Are you writing more or is this a one shot?

[ophelia1234]

Well, it just kind of came out of nowhere and right now I'm treating it as a one shot that just sort of fits in with the other story.

Who the heck knows, though. Puck kind of invades when he wants to these days! (I'm petrified I am going to say the f word in front of someone)

[fellowgleek]

haha this was great! you have to update! i have to know what he typed!
my favorite line was: Puck has to smile a little bit about how the character limit keeps cutting her off. (Apparently AT&T has been able to accomplish what no one else has in 16 years.). i loled when i read it.

[echo_2009]

Soo Nice! I was happy to find this in my mail today...want you to continue from here on!

Kisses!
Roberta