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ophelia1234

Disney Laced Profanity: Chapter Nine (Rachel/Puck)

Jan 30, 2010 15:44

( Chapter Nine )

disney laced profanity, rachel/puck, glee, puck/rachel

Comments 19

missmx24 January 30 2010, 21:59:28 UTC

Oh my goodness. You are a genius. This chapter was great. :D
I adored Rachel. She truly is a psychopath, yet insanely good at thinking things up on the spot. ;)
Puck made me giggle.
Update soon! I look forward to it.

ophelia1234 January 30 2010, 23:17:48 UTC

Wow! Thanks for the fun comment. :-)

I really do try to do justice Rachel's craziness...it wouldn't do to make her too normal!

phantom_queen January 30 2010, 22:00:32 UTC

LOL..laughing yoga is the shit! Haha. I love that Puck's favorite Disney show is Mary Poppins

ophelia1234 January 30 2010, 23:18:51 UTC

You know what is funny? Laughing Yoga is a real thing! (I know next to nothing about it, but it IS real!)

Thanks for the comment! :-)

cailet_06 January 30 2010, 22:13:41 UTC

See this is why Puck is so good for Rachel. They are both evil geniuses. Great update!

ophelia1234 January 30 2010, 23:19:15 UTC

Thanks!!

burntotears January 30 2010, 22:57:10 UTC

AHAHAHA. God you are amazing. Really. Friggin hilarious and fantastic. And sexy and sort of frightening too! :D

ophelia1234 January 30 2010, 23:20:26 UTC

Hee! Thanks!! (I feel a little guilty for using Mary Poppins that way... LOL)

Uhm, also? I am in LOVE with your new icon pic. What is that FROM???

burntotears January 30 2010, 23:49:47 UTC

It is a photoshoot Mark did somewheres. I found it in camelgraphics glee icons. The specific post is here, but you should check out all her glee icons, cos they are fantastic beyond all else!

http://community.livejournal.com/camelgraphics/tag/icons:+glee

ophelia1234 January 30 2010, 23:53:45 UTC

Thanks for the link!

Good lord-- that picture is enough to make a girl want to write a story alllll about bubble gum.

psychme January 31 2010, 00:25:08 UTC

I'm not seeing this chapter on FF.net yet, so I'll leave my review here.

Principal Vega's perspective in general and his thoughts on the 'hawk in particular made me smile. I loved how Rachel was onto Puck's intentions from the start, and yet fell prey to his seduction anyway. I think the guy-singing-to-her thing is Rachel's weakness; it's how she fell for Finn, and then started crushing on Mr. Schue on the show, after all. But of course I believe that Puck's special brand of sexiness had a part to play, too. ;) And I adored the sprinklings of sweetness that broke into Puck's thoughts.

Between this chapter and the last, you've really hit upon how well-matched Puck and Rachel are. Those plans for world domination that Puck mentioned previously? Imagine how much easier those would go if you added Rachel into the mix.

ophelia1234 January 31 2010, 00:42:05 UTC

Thanks for the detailed review! I love those :-) (And yeah-- if Rachel and Puck ever really teamed up?? Scary!! LOL)

Yeah, I am currently having a fit with FF.net. It won't let me upload anything. I'm hoping whatever the deal is gets resolved sooner rather than later.