First Line Fic recs

[ophelia_winters]

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[biggrstaffbunch]

dont be too hard on yourself! first lines SUCK. i cant tell you how many times i write stuff then rearrange the whole fic around a completely new first line cause the first one was so bad.

i like the human laws of gallifrey a lot! i'll have to check it out.

[ophelia_winters]

Aw thanks hun! that kind of helped, my eyes were starting to burn after re-reading those fist lines...

I hope you like HLoG!