come play with me; let me talk to you about writing!:

[opheliahyde]

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written and comment with that selection to this post. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what’s going on in the character’s heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means

Comments

[lavendergaia]

Any of the Sam/Brooke ones. *needy bitch*

Oh, and according to a "dream expert" on Doctor Oz, I want to have a baby. So there's that.

[unavoidedcrisis]

NAME IT LEEN.

[lavendergaia]

THE BABY I AM NEVER HAVING WILL BE NAMED LEEN.

I did meet an adorable puppy yesterday, it was super precious

[unavoidedcrisis]

I bet it was also named Leen.

[unavoidedcrisis]

brb reading ALL THE FIC to find a passage I want to see :D

[opheliahyde]

I DON'T KNOW IF I HAVE ANY FANDOMS/SHIPS YOU LIKE /o\

[unavoidedcrisis]

I'LL FIND SOMETHING/GUILT YOU INTO WRITING SOMETHING I DO LIKE, OH HAY YOU'RE SIGNED UP FOR POLY BANG HINT HINT.

[opheliahyde]

DO YOUR WORST.

I AM CURIOUS: what do you even ship in A Song Of Ice and Fire?

[scorpiod1]

CAN I GIVE YOU MORE THAN ONE?

[opheliahyde]

YES YOU MAY.

[scorpiod1]

FIRST ONE

[scorpiod1]

SECOND ONE:

They sit next to each other at dinner with their ankles folded around the other under the table as their father reiterates what Mama had said while they were gone (he pretties it up a bit, spinning words like thread, making everything sound much better than it actually is; Lucrezia knows there’s a reason her papa is a better salesman than Mama). Juan laughs as he speaks. “With all due respect Father, but the only man Lucrezia will ever choose is Cesare,” he says, still chuckling, but Lucrezia can see the way he fixes Cesare with a stare