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ophelivia

Song in Red and Gray-Chapter 38

Jan 24, 2009 20:28

Title: Song in Red & Gray-Chapter 38: Future
Author: ophelivia
Rating: R-NC17
Word Count: 18,530
Pairing: Beckett/OC, James/OC
Characters: James/Rose
Summary: "Do just what I tell you and no one will get hurt." A series of vignettes spanning both films.
Status: In-Progress
Disclaimer: I don't own the Pirates characters. Rose is mine, but I should ( Read more... )

future, rose, chapter 38, james, beckett/oc, song in red and gray

Comments 9

purple_poet January 25 2009, 04:48:12 UTC

Your fanfics are back, yey!!!! I look forward to reading the other half

ophelivia January 25 2009, 05:05:25 UTC

::hugs:: You're the best kid

pink_siamese January 25 2009, 06:01:49 UTC

I was wondering where you'd disappeared to.

ophelivia January 25 2009, 09:54:16 UTC

Into the interminable labyrinth of writer's block. Hey, any chance you could organize FWT into a chapter list? I could spend my last days of freedom FINALLY giving it the attention it deserves

pink_siamese January 25 2009, 16:51:25 UTC

Sure, you can read them all here:

http://www.piratestripes.net/vendetta/v/viewstory.php?sid=305&ageconsent=ok&warning=6

sunsetdawn20 January 25 2009, 06:04:54 UTC

You know how much I love your writing, so that goes without saying! It's hard to even dissect it into the individual things I love but I will try anyway. First of all the dynamics between Rose and James is absolutely fascinating. He, the strong man, promising protection but it's more like a plea for help. Absolutely gorgeous. And of course I love Rose and James to bits but you know that too. :) It feels scary but somehow very "natural" for Rose to sound like Cutler, it really did seem like a natural progress in your fic, the way she got more and more like him. And I have idea if that made sense but it's 7am, so bear with me love. :)

"James heard Lord Beckett from Rose’s mouth." I already told you how much I adore this.

"Why were the arms cradling her as if they needed her?" So wonderful that a protective movement turns into a cry for help. I love it.

And that last line is made of win!

Wonderful new chapter. Thank you so much again. :)

greeneyespurple January 25 2009, 13:48:51 UTC

Oh I really liked this one! So happy to see you back! It was amazing. Their interaction... brilliant. Reading this is like watching a wave touch the shore. It seems Rose and James get so incredible close and in a matter of a second, they're so far apart.
I love how Cutler manages to somehow still be the center of their attention even if he isn't present, or 'only' through Rose.
<3!

Email to Cassidy vlita316 January 30 2009, 17:07:46 UTC

here's a copy of the Email response i got back from Cassidy:

hey Veronica,
Thanks so much for your note. I am really delighted to have you in a class once again. You always add so much and keep me on my toes. It's great, too, that you and Caitlin know each other and can work together I'm looking forward to the semester. I think you will enjoy it.
I'm glad to hear that Liv is interested in transferring into one of my classes. I just signed in 2 more students to NS12, seniors who want to graduate this semester, so it's already at 24, altho 22 is the limit. But my NS11 class is still at 22, and 1 or 2 students may drop, as usually happens. That class meets MW, 2 - 4 pm in the same room (berliner 207). If she is free then, I would be delighted to sign her in. She could come to the class on Monday. If that doesn't work, I'll try to figure out a way to sign her into NS12.

Kind regards
DrC