new depressing poetry shit as usual.. i call this one...

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                                  POST DISASTER

Soft whispers escape from tightly clenched lips

slowly caressing what is my spirit into submission.

Those left behind may be considered the meek.

Artistic expressions awarded

By exchanging cancer for answers.

One trechary replaced for another

interpretation suggested,

but formally rejected.

Comments

[mars_volta24]

Chris, Write a poem for me ... I ♥ your words!!!

Please?

sure sex..

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ill do that of course,

unlike other people who say they will and dont..

soooo i can either like just sporatically pick something to write about, say its for you.. give you one done already, say its for you..

write one about you.. prolly cheesy

or you give me a topic.. on whatever.. and it can be yours i guess..

:)
love ya sex
late

Re: sure sex..

[mars_volta24]

Topic Topic ... Let me think!

What about Eyes ... That's always nice! I ♥ Eyes ..
(you have some dreamy ones)

Lve ya sex?

haha

I &hearts you dear

Random

[punkrawk327]

Hey - I saw your this poem in your app on EvidenceOfLife and for what it's worth, I liked it. I certainly don't always agree with what the members on that community say - so just thought I'd say so. Have a good night.

Kerri

thanks very much...

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glad you liked it..
its weird.. this is my second app. try
because i've viewed them awhile, and enjoy alot
of the stuff that comes out of there, while equally
not enjoying the rest...

its very broad in interests.. as far as what they all like.. mostly i applied just so i can critique.. but oh well we shall see...

this one ended up getting a few people interested in another community, so i dunno.. maybe its just luck of the draw..

not to ramble on about this useless bs..

are you a member there?

anyway, chat with ya later
night
chris

Thanks!

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sorry about the delayed reply... i swear i already replied to you..

are you in that comm?

they tend to be basic thurr'

anyway,
ttys
chris

Re: Thanks!

[punkrawk327]

Hey - yeah, you did respond earlier, but I was busy with school shit, then out of town for the weekend so I didn't reply back - so I guess I'm the one that should apologize for the delayed response =P No, I'm not in that community - I just get a kick out of some of the things people say in responses to poety. I might try applying sometime - I've just been too damn busy to get anything that's even remotely put-together enough to put up. Anyways, I'll catch ya later.

Kerri