What Happened in the End? Chapter 8.

Jul 08, 2008 20:19

Title: What Happened in the End?  Chapter 8.
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lazy_nightowl July 11 2008, 20:27:08 UTC
I really like this chapter a lot.

My favorite part is toward the end, where they are both wondering what the other is thinking, with regard to the "room" in each other's lives. Very well-done.

Looking forward to more!

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juditigger July 12 2008, 01:45:35 UTC
^ yup me too!!!

thanks for this great installment!

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orange450 July 14 2008, 17:43:56 UTC
Thank you very much!

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orange450 July 14 2008, 17:43:29 UTC
Thank you very much!

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bmax67 July 15 2008, 20:28:28 UTC
Catching up on your story now. It's been hectic lately.

Great chapter!

Loved how House used pizza as a metaphor. So Houselike. :)

And Yay! for House's line "No bike, no more Corvette."

Gotta get out there on the bike.

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orange450 July 16 2008, 02:35:40 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the pizza metaphor. This may sound strange - but it's actually taken from the way I feel about pizza. One of my favorite foods, but I try not to eat it too often. When I do, I'm amazed at how wonderful it tastes, and it's almost as if I'd forgotten how good it is. I'd been wanting to use that idea in a story for a very long time, so I was thrilled when the opportunity presented itself :-)

>>Gotta get out there on the bike. <<

Yes indeed! My husband and I are getting ready for a bike trip to Novia Scotia and Prince Edward Island at the end of July. We'll be riding with another couple from my husband's bike club. We're in the NY area, and this will be my longest trip yet. I'm very excited! I'm not sure if I'll be finished posting the story yet, but I'm working on it.

Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

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