Meeting in the Middle, Chapter 1: The Fog of War

[orange_crush42]

Alright, folks, be merciful! This is my first ever fic posting

Comments

[surfmistress]

Wow! Great start, are you sure this is your first story :-D

Hope you don't mind, but I'm going to zip over to your journal and friend you to make sure I won't miss the next exciting chapter.

[orange_crush42]

Don't mind a bit! And I'm a writer by trade (no, nobody you will ever in a million years have heard of), but this is my first time trying fiction. It's utterly terrifying, so thanks for the encouragement!

[lisianpeia]

Hey, sorry the lack of criativity, but I'm with surfmistress here!

I liked this begging! Don't forget to post the new chapters in hgxss, so I won't miss it!

Thanks for sharing!

[labrt2004]

This is wonderful! You write a great injury scene, actually. I've always found it difficult to talk about blood and gore without sounding contrived, but your was believable. And *squee* about tender Snape. Can't wait for the next installment.

Have you thought about archiving this? OWL, where I admin, would love to host your story :)

[labrt2004]

Ah, n/m! I see that you're on Ash! Not that OWL wouldn't still love to have you, but I wanted to make sure that you were SOMEWHERE other than LJ because this is a very intriguing beginning to a fic :)

[orange_crush42]

Of course! Also? Icon LOVE. I adore Makani.

[makaem]

This is an awesome start. I can't wait to read the rest.