Well now you know what you (and Le) have done to me for the past coupla months with the Epic yeah? Try multiplying this by 13461354 times for all the chapters. Hah.
LOL sorry, as you can see I'm not very adept at responding to people after making them cry. (That and it's almost 1 am now, my brain is just on crack.) Er, *hands tissues*
I absolutely didn't mean for this to be sad, it was just sort of weird when I wrote it.. *apologetic smile*
I have hardly ever read something so beautiful. This actually brought tears to my eyes.
xxx. book
When Frank said he was giving him a book for Christmas, it wasn't exactly what he had been expecting (You're giving me my own autobiography? What the fuck Frank, at least gimme something I hadn't written. Like yours. ...wait, you went out and bought this? And what is that you've written comments on all the pages?!).
Stevie picks it up, mutters stupid obnoxious twat, and carefully smooths the edges of the book. This is what love feels like, not empty repetition of much-abused words, but deeds, actual care, painstaking devotion.
John and Rio like to wear their pain plain for all to see, wrap their sorrow round their shoulders, and Stevie thinks he's never hated them more). This line is poetry. This articulates the hurt so well.
What I especially loved is how you can use just the right words to portray an emotion. There is no excess, want, no bothersome breaks.
Oh love. I wouldn't know, and I don't have an autobiography, but I wished someone would write all over mine and give it to me anyway. So I could smooth out its edges carefully too, every so often. *G* But yes I agree, love should really be something like this yeah? (I'm glad you picked out this part *smiles*, took me forever and a year to get it right.)
Thank you so so much, you say such nice things and I'm not sure how much of it is actually deserved. But still, thank you. :)
wow. this was just... so sad and amazingly written. Some of it was just so real and heartbreaking and... i cant even think right now let alone write a decent comment! BTW ive just realised i forgot to say - You wrote Stevie/Lamps - OMG i love you so much!!! (apart from the fact that you killed lamps!!!!!) but still stevie and lamps!!!!! theyre like my favourite OTP ever!!! and no one writes enough of them. I did try once but its kind of hard to make it believable so none of them ever worked out.
Thank you so much, I'm glad you thought it felt real. :)
And yes of course I wrote *G* I love them, how could I not? I agree, not enough has been written about them. You though, you should try and then post it (god knows we need more writers of this pairing). You never know who might like it, I've learned that at least. :D
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LOL sorry, as you can see I'm not very adept at responding to people after making them cry. (That and it's almost 1 am now, my brain is just on crack.) Er, *hands tissues*
I absolutely didn't mean for this to be sad, it was just sort of weird when I wrote it.. *apologetic smile*
Thank you, Kla (I think?).
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Thank you dear, really. Means a lot to me you liked it. ♥
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xxx. book
When Frank said he was giving him a book for Christmas, it wasn't exactly what he had been expecting (You're giving me my own autobiography? What the fuck Frank, at least gimme something I hadn't written. Like yours. ...wait, you went out and bought this? And what is that you've written comments on all the pages?!).
Stevie picks it up, mutters stupid obnoxious twat, and carefully smooths the edges of the book.
This is what love feels like, not empty repetition of much-abused words, but deeds, actual care, painstaking devotion.
John and Rio like to wear their pain plain for all to see, wrap their sorrow round their shoulders, and Stevie thinks he's never hated them more).
This line is poetry. This articulates the hurt so well.
What I especially loved is how you can use just the right words to portray an emotion. There is no excess, want, no bothersome breaks.
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Thank you so so much, you say such nice things and I'm not sure how much of it is actually deserved. But still, thank you. :)
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked this anyhow.
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*hands you tissues and cookies and whatever that will help no Stevie though, he's mine* :D
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What about Xabi then? Can I have him? or Luis?
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BTW ive just realised i forgot to say - You wrote Stevie/Lamps - OMG i love you so much!!! (apart from the fact that you killed lamps!!!!!) but still stevie and lamps!!!!! theyre like my favourite OTP ever!!! and no one writes enough of them. I did try once but its kind of hard to make it believable so none of them ever worked out.
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And yes of course I wrote *G* I love them, how could I not? I agree, not enough has been written about them. You though, you should try and then post it (god knows we need more writers of this pairing). You never know who might like it, I've learned that at least. :D
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