SMOSH FIC: What It Was Before (Chapter 1)

[orangefriday]

Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 1)
Ratng: PG-13 (NC-17 later chapters)
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC, Drama
Summary:  Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died.

Comments

[mutual_death]

Wow...this was amazing. The detail was great and the sick Ian characterization was spot-on. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one! (I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat through the whole thing.)

Poor Ian!

[orangefriday]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it since I was a little scared it might be boring because there wasn't too much slash XD

Yayyy!!

[orangefriday]

Thank you!!

[vadriplz]

What a beautifully set mood! It was kinda grim and desperate and I could really feel both of their pain.
And their characters were completely fine, I tell you. I mean, I don't know how they'd react in a situation like that, you know, but the way you made them try to cling on to their old humor and how the reality of the situation pulled them away from that was really believable.
Realistic and beautiful, I absolutely love this story! :) <3

[orangefriday]

Awww thank you! That really means a lot :)

[smoshme2]

Daaaaamn, that was cute! More of that, please! (:

[orangefriday]

Coming right up (soon)! ;D

[roxy_rose]

This is great! Really well written- can't wait for the next part!! x

[orangefriday]

Thank you!