Smosh Fic: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)

[orangefriday]

Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 4)
Ratng: NC-17 ish
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC, Drama
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died
Chapter Summary: Remembering and acknowleding

Comments

[mutual_death]

While I was catching up on the Ianthony Community explosion, I saved the best for last. (I don't mean to offend anyone else AT ALL). I'm just so into this story, it's not even funny. I made sure I was COMPLETELY alone before reading this so that no one interrupted

[mutual_death]

I'm still fanning myself...embarrassing! Your writing is so good, though.

*Reading it again*

[orangefriday]

*even MORE embarrassed* Ugh... seriously, why do you have to make me feel like this? I'm so scared now LOL (good scared though, if that makes any sense).

I'm not going to lie, I was flailing my arms and screaming when I read your comment because yeah... it made me EXTREMELY happy!!

GAHHH! *gushes* Thank you so much for reading it and taking the time to make me feel happy XD

Btw, I stalk your page too. >;)

[mutual_death]

Stalkers unite!

[ashley_marie811]

So I was able to read chapts 1-4 all in one night. Teehee, I'm a cheater x3

SO ANYWAYASDGLFDJ. Let me share my reactions with you about this story!
Chapter 1: I was like tearing up. It was so sad, but the good kind of sad. Especially the part when Ian said he felt like he got hit by a firetruck & thought Anthony would laugh but didn't... I was like OMG T_T I'm a sensitive person xD
Chapter 2: I was on the edge of my bed (because my laptop rests on my chair) the entire time. The action going on in the hospital bed room - GOSH, I CAN'T. <3
Chapter 3: OOH SNAAAP DRAAAAMAAA!
Chapter 4: Clever. So clever. On the M/A conversation. Bravo, my dear. Bravo.

When I read this, I can really hear the voices talking in my head. I don't even know how Makayla sounds and yet I hear her. Am I weird? xD
But in all seriousness, the story's going so great so far. It's definitely beautifully written. & I really love the going back and forth of POVs. Now I shall 'patiently' wait for the next chapt. <3

[orangefriday]

<3 <3 <3
I love your reactions!!
I always hear Makayla as a little... too happy, too forced. Always trying to look for the better side and neglect the truth. It's kind of like those wives that turn a blind eye to their husband's bad behaviour. 8) Not that Anthony's her husband or doing anything bad...
I was going to make her bitchier and mean but I would like to think Anthony wouldn't stay too long with someone like that.

Thank you so much for reading this!!

[hvnlyumbrlla]

HOLY DINGLEBERRIES! With all the recent updates on the Ianthony com, I almost missed this! That would have been freaking terrible seeing as though I am addicted to this whole story...
I just want to jump into the story, smack Anthony, push Makayla out of a window, and force Ian to confess his love!
Can't wait for the next update *happy dance*
Ok, I'm going to stop commenting on things when there's caffeine in my system!

[orangefriday]

LOLOL! That made me laugh so much! *dances with you*
Thanks for reading!!

[reshmesh]

I remember previously mentioning how you should just assume that I love anything you write and the same goes for this. I just thought as it's 2am and I'm rereading this for the tenth time that I should leave a comment.
I liked that there wasn't slash in this chapter. It just works so well.
DAMN ANTHONY NEEDS TO RECOGNISE!
I like all the chapters(especially the second one) made me go hothohothothot(In the words of Toby Tobuscus Turner), awww, smoshgasm and made me really want to carry on reading until the sunrises.

[orangefriday]

You read this 10 times????? WOW! (I don't even think I've read it that much.. LOL)

Oh yeah, I had a lot of fun writing the second chapter *teehee*

Thanks for commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D And sleep well :P

[reshmesh]

Thanks, I'll sleep later once I'm done re-reading the chapters again seeing as I just want to.