Smosh Fic: What It Was Before (Chapter 5)

[orangefriday]

Title: What It Was Before (Chapter 5)
Ratng: PG-13
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst, OOC
Summary: Ian comes out of a coma caused by a car accident to find himself feeling like a stranger in his own life. Anthony struggles with the idea that his best friend had almost died.
Chapter Summary: Losing something hurts and sometimes it's

Comments

[michaelangelo24]

Woah, that was excellent. It's a totally different experience to see them have to struggle through such emotions and you pulled it off wonderfully. I'm also glad that they found each other... in bed. ;D

[smoshluv]

Okay, so yesterday, I was late to school because of Mutual_Death's fanfiction(darn it for being so good..), and yours almost made me late, too. If it weren't for my mom nagging constantly for me to stop reading 'whatever I was so obsessed with', I would've sat and missed the bus again to finish reading! All day I was impatient to get home and finish:P
I'm so depressed that this is the end...I'm so happy with the ending...I'm so in love with your writing<3
See, I love almost all posts in Ianthony, but there's always a few series that I tend to be excited about and like more; this was one of those XD You're a way better writer than I am; I love your descriptions and creativity!
Okay, I could ramble for hours about what I like about your writing, but I've already written a bible's worth of a comment, so I'll stop :P Loved it, love you, love love love(:
<333

[orangefriday]

I can't go to school unless I check out what's happened overnight in the comm and that sometimes does more damage than good XD

Oh geez.. I've only started reading mutual_deaths' fanfic. I'm in the process of reading greatness!

Hmm.. about this ending... there IS actually an epilogue... but since you've brought up that this chapter is a good ending, I'm beginning to debate whether the epilogue is needed (since while writing this chapter, I was thinking I could really just end it like this). Would you be up for the epilogue?

And I love your comments, even if they're longer than 10 bibles! Thank you so much! Makes me feel so good inside :D :D

[smoshluv]

Haha me while reading this comment:
about an ending...there IS and epilouge...
"WHHAAT!!"
but since you brought it up that this chapter is a good ending...
"no! nonononono-"
I'm beginning to debate whether the epilogue is needed...
"NO! Of course it is! ukwgedhttfuk!!!"
Would you be up for the epilogue?
YES. YES. YES!!!

[roxy_rose]

So amazing!!! good job!

[orangefriday]

:D Aw, thanks!

[mutual_death]

I'm sort of pathetic, in case you haven't notice. I took off work a wee bit early to read this fic. And I'm immensely glad I did. Is this the end? I don't even know because I'm so OVERWHELMED by the lovely words of this dramatic and sobering tale of our beloved Ian and Anthony.

I'm not one to cry but when Anthony broke down, so did I. I actually got misty-eyed and I could feel by heart beating along with Ian's as he listened to Anthony's recounting of the events. I LOVED the flashback...it brought everything together perfectly. Like Ian, the memories were broken and rebuilt so seamlessly, it was like reading a professional novel.

I don't know what else to say. My thoughts are so scattered right now...I'm just trying to digest this fic...I need more time and air and...Ugh! I don't even know!

In conclusion: I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING!! I NEED TO STOP SCREAMING!! [=

[orangefriday]

I would have loved to know your excuse for going home early. And I feel honoured you would do that LOL (even though you shouldn't *accusing/scolding finger*) :P

I do actually have an epilogue almost done! Dunno how I feel about it just yet, though. But it was much easier to write than this chapter. God... probably the hardest thing I've written in my life (and I wrote it TWICE from scratch. Damn.. computer..).

YES, YOU TEARED UP! LOL!!! Omg, that makes me feel very accomplished as a writer. *wipes away own tears* And professional novel?! That's TOO MUCH. You take it back!

Thank you, thank you for your wonderful encouragement and compliments!

[smoshyruth]

Oh my god!That was sooo good!!!!! :} I love you for writing this:D

[orangefriday]

Thank you, thank you!!!

[hvnlyumbrlla]

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That. Was. Amazing. The raw emotions were beautiful and perfectly described. I loved Anthony's break-down (I'm really weird) and then when Ian was comforting him? fhiusaiojfhs. This was worth the wait by FAR. It was perfect. I love your writing so much.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go scream in my pillow, cry, and then read it again.

[orangefriday]

HAHAHAHA! I saw someone, hunched over with arms dangling and a really pissed off/exhausted face, panting and angrily staring at me.

Would that be you? LOL (just kidding!)

YES! Did you catch on to the whole, "omg! Ian is comforting him now even though Anthony's been doing that the whole fic!" I hope so because that was really my WHOLE point of writing this. (I had a similar panting and hitting the keyboard experience when I came across that epiphany.)

Thank you so much for your kind comments and thank you for reading this!!!!! <3

[hvnlyumbrlla]

How did you know? Do you have cameras set up in my room *darts eyes suspiciously*

I did catch that :) The tables turned! They finally stopped ignoring and denying the problem thus beginning the healing process *cue dramatic music and myself in front of a fireplace with fancy specks*
That's why I loved this story so damn much, it had conflict, plot, twists *applauds*