Smosh Fic: He'd Never Admit It (2 in 1)

Oct 23, 2011 23:21

Writer's block? *punches it in the face* I have defeated you, finally.

TItle: Blue Scarf
Rating: PG
Pairings: Ian/Anthony (friendship)
Genre/Warnings: Fluff
Summary: Anthony's going on a trip. Ian's going to be so damn lonely.

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smosh, one-shot, fanfiction, slash

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mutual_death October 25 2011, 06:34:45 UTC
You even write fluff spectacularly. Ian in a fru-fru scarf, Anthony kissing him, then the nurse thinking they were lovers (tehehe...I think I had a story where someone mistakenly called them partners. I could see that happening in real life, though!)

The little details make all the difference and I've always been jealous of your metaphors...They're so tough to write but you make it look so damn easy. ;)

I have a series of drabbles that sort of connect...I've never finished them, either. I've wanted to but I can't seem to finish my other story. lol

Anyways, I loved this as always. I had to read it again before bed and I'm so glad I did. Bromance FTW!

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orangefriday October 25 2011, 07:24:09 UTC
How about I do your job for you for a while (since it sounds so freakin' awesome!) and you take the extra free time to write your amazing fics. THEN EVERYONE WILL BE HAPPY! YAYAYAY! XD

Are you talking about the my favourite fic where Anthony went to take Charlie to the vet? Teehee! That one is so super cute!!

And, hah, I think it's funny because your writing looks so effortless to me; just flows so naturally and realistic when I read it.

Anyway, I hope you get lots of sleep tonight! Don't work too hard! :P Thanks for reading!!

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mutual_death October 26 2011, 02:07:09 UTC
Please take my job for like two weeks. That would be perfect! I can't be held liable for any sleep you may lose or weirdo co-workers that you may encounter. :P

That's the fic! I've written so many I can't keep them straight. I need a fanfic index. Lol The book you're making will be a good start. ;)

No, your stories flow better! (Starting to sound like one of those annoying couples that say "no, you hang up first..." Have you ever done that? Does anyone? I hope I never do...that would make me stab my eyeball with a fork).

I love your writing though!! [=

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orangefriday October 26 2011, 02:12:34 UTC
I used to hold 5 hour phone conversations (back when phones were used for listening to) and my friend and I would do the "NO BITCH! YOU HANG UP FIRST" thing for an hour.

Now, I just hang up at the first opportunity and yell, "JUST TEXT ME!"

So I'll start your job tomorrow, alright? Just sit back in that chair of yours and write away. Hehehehehehehehe! >:B

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destpar234 October 25 2011, 06:52:51 UTC

AWWW <--- me while reading both fics

they're so cute and written extrememly well! i love your writing style, wonderful stories :3!! gah, so cute >

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orangefriday October 25 2011, 07:24:58 UTC
>_< I'm glad you liked it!

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orangefriday October 25 2011, 08:46:29 UTC
XD Hehe! Thanks so much!

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freshdumbledore October 25 2011, 09:29:05 UTC
It's hard for a writer to put two characters into an unfamiliar situation while keeping those two still in character. (I don't think Ian and Anthony hang out in hospitals very often :D) However you managed it perfectly, I could imagine every little scene in my mind and the dialogs are plain awesome.
If I really had to chose, I think I like the second one better, it just seems like it could really happen (or already did) and I adore Jimmy :)
I love those little slash hints, I don't think that I'll ever be able to read a Smosh fic without looking for some men love, that's what Ian meant with "sick bastard", I guess :D
...yes, I'm definitely going to read that again on my last day of my holidays to cheer me up a little!

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orangefriday October 25 2011, 18:22:41 UTC
I watch/read everything with a slash-y mind. And I fear for next year, when I'm going to take a creative writing course on writing literature for kids. Ehhhhh... XD

Anyway, thank you so much for reading. :D And I'm glad this could cheer you up! Shouldn't holidays make you feel good anyway? I could use one with all these exams every week. Ughhh

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freshdumbledore October 25 2011, 19:07:19 UTC
Haha that would be an interesting way to teach kids about homosexuality. Maybe someday I will say to my kid "Let's read this book from orangefriday. You will learn a lot about men love in it.":D

You're welcome. :) Normally they do but on my last day I'm always a depressed wreck because I know that school is going to start the next day. Maybe your fic will help :D

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orangefriday October 26 2011, 01:14:12 UTC
LOL! Oh goodness. Men-love book for children? HA!

I saw on Tumblr (I just got into that business and oh gosh, I'm scared of being obsessed. Right now, I'm okay since I still don't quite understand it) a post about a children's book about homosexuality. It was pretty cute!

Ew, I understand now. That last day is always so bittersweet.

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smoshyruth October 26 2011, 04:24:00 UTC
I loved both stories!You're such an amazing writer;)

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orangefriday October 26 2011, 04:35:15 UTC
Teehee! Thank you :)

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