Comments | orangefriday: Smosh Fic: (Almost) Sex Scene

orangefriday

Smosh Fic: (Almost) Sex Scene

Dec 27, 2011 03:06

Title: (Almost) Sex Scene
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Ian/Anthony
Genre: Humour, Smut
Summary: Movies make sex look wonderful - like something that could be achieved by anybody.

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smosh, one-shot, fanfiction

Comments 36

rubyelf December 27 2011, 11:52:16 UTC

Oh, I think you did that very well! Their intense focus on each other makes it work very nicely.

And yes, it most certainly counts as smut. There are lots of different sorts of sex that don't involve insertion of certain things in certain places and all of them are valid and lots of them are fun!

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rubyelf December 27 2011, 22:13:14 UTC

LOL... I think you replied to my comment instead of to the story! Might want to re-comment to make sure she sees it! :)

orangefriday December 28 2011, 00:36:11 UTC

Good to know my first smut fic counts as smut! LOL@"Certain things in certain places". I've got multiple ideas now... XD

rubyelf December 27 2011, 22:20:23 UTC

Oh, yeah, and didn't you say you used to be an LoTR fan? There's always room for some more LoTR smut in the communities I frequent...

orangefriday December 28 2011, 00:39:47 UTC

I'm re-watching LoTR right now (extended versions)! I don't think I'm a hardcore-enough fan to write (I haven't even read the books! *shame*) but I did used to read fics. I plan on reading the books one day though... I really really should!

rubyelf December 28 2011, 02:50:38 UTC

Hehe... there's lots of people writing LoTR stuff that are writing pure movie-verse and have never read the books.

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orangefriday December 28 2011, 00:44:01 UTC

Ohmygod, I'm surprised you felt the same way as Ian (because I sure did... writing this whole thing was so... difficult *so embarrassing!*)

Yay! I'm glad you like it and thank you for reading. As for future smut... Let's hope my dirty mind keeps coming up with ideas. XD

saint_elsewhere December 28 2011, 00:38:28 UTC

Love it! Perfectly awkward and hot! I expect more smut from you soontimes!

orangefriday December 28 2011, 00:44:25 UTC

Thank you <3 And ah, more smut? I'll try!

destiel09 December 28 2011, 04:53:51 UTC

Yeah! That was soo hot ^.^ You shoul be super proud of it! I love the way they acted. That was super cute! I wanted to write a story like that too, can I? Cause I don't wanna stole your idea... Anyway, super good smut!! <3 Happy holiday!

orangefriday December 28 2011, 05:42:41 UTC

Oh, definitely write your story! I wanna read it! I don't own the idea anyway :P

Thanks for reading!