Smosh Fic: Greyscape (Chapter 6)

Nov 05, 2012 20:47

Title: Greyscape (Chapter 6)
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: (future) Ian/Anthony,
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smosh, multi-chapter, greyscape, fanfiction, slash

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esprz November 6 2012, 08:20:57 UTC
That was so intense. If this were ever turned into a graphic novel it would be so bad ass! Your way with words never ceases to amaze and captivate too.

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orangefriday November 7 2012, 05:51:59 UTC
Oh! That's an interesting idea! I'll need to con somebody into drawing it all though XD

Thank you so much for reading!!

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orangefriday November 7 2012, 05:55:13 UTC

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mutual_death November 7 2012, 00:19:14 UTC
That was so intense! Your descriptions were so clear, and the emotions so palpable, it felt like I was watching a movie. My eyes were so dry after reading this chapter because I hadn't blinked the entire time. (Of course, all this coffee I've consumed hasn't helped lol). I swear, I thought I was drowning with Ian there for a moment.

So beautiful! -flails- I love it so much. Please don't stop writing this. I'll do anything you want. ;)

I needed a break from writing so badly. My friend convinced me to do NaNo WriMo this year and I haven't stopped writing since. :P More distractions please!

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orangefriday November 7 2012, 06:00:06 UTC
You'd do anything..??


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mutual_death November 7 2012, 18:20:58 UTC
Believe me, you do NOT want to read it! NaNo leaves no time for editing, so I'm sure there are commas on top of commas on top of spelling mistakes. Already, I know I have to break up my first and second chapters (there so long and it's all a bunch of introductory crap and dialogue...it's driving me crazy not to edit...I'm dying Bel Bel!) and I'm sure my descriptions are too rushed and not at all emotional. -sigh- I'll quit ranting and complaining now. lol

I'm just happy you've churned out another glorious chapter to the most exciting and mysterious Smosh Fic that exists. [=

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orangefriday November 8 2012, 02:15:10 UTC
I have an image of you screaming and crying while tapping furiously on the keyboard, trying your damned fastest to get your story out. LOL!

At least tell me what it's about!

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orangefriday November 7 2012, 06:01:59 UTC
Thanks for reading and I'll do my best to keep on writing!

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9800andseagulls November 8 2012, 02:06:55 UTC
So I've been waiting for this and basically when i saw it

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orangefriday November 8 2012, 02:12:34 UTC
Omg, Channing Tatum is so hot. *melts* LOL

I'm a little unsure of where I'm going either but I've got a mental roadmap and hopefully it gets us where I'd like us to go. I'm so honoured you trust in me even though I'm blind as a molerat. ;___; Thank you for reading (and for Channing Tatum)!!

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9800andseagulls November 10 2012, 08:54:06 UTC
Oh well, it just means you've got so many options of where the plot could go! And just out of curiosity, are you from America or England? I know typically Americans spell grey with an A and people from the UK (like myself)spell it with an E. I was just wondering :3

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orangefriday November 10 2012, 17:16:27 UTC
I'm in between, living in Canada :) Canadian spelling is pretty much like UK spelling so we like our 'u's to be in favourite and honour and humour and colour. Funny story: I had to write a thank-you letter to the company that gave me some scholarship money and my guidance counsellor was looking at it to check for errors. I was 100% (smugly) SURE that I had NO errors. But because I spelled "honour" with a 'u', he made me change and reprint the whole letter again. I think I argued with him for about 2 minutes that that IS how you spell honour in Canada and that "honor" is American spelling. He just kept going, "No, I'm sure it's not spelled like that."

*shakes fist at his non-Canadian/UK spelling knowledge* HAHAHA!

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