Smosh Fic: The Hollow Place

[orangefriday]

Title: The Hollow Place
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: One-sided Ian/Anthony, Anthony/Kalel, Ian/Melanie
Genre/Warnings: Angst, One-Shot
Summary: "And it felt like a hollow place and it felt like a loss, a loss that he never even had in the first place."
A/N: This wasn't supposed to be angst-y. I don't know what happened and I'm annoyed as anybody else who

Comments

[orangefriday]

Aw *hands you a tissue* Thank you for reading!

[orangefriday]

You know, I went up to read over the story and I'm like "wtf are you talking about?" HAAH!

Well, I like incoherent slaves so yeah. >:)
Bu seriously, lol, your comments are always one of the few I look forward to and which makes me life! So thank you!

AND ARE YOU FREE OF THE DEVIL CALLED SCHOOL YET?! I am almost free and can eventually reemerge onto Skype (saw you msg btw but I was half asleep haha)

[orangefriday]

I think if I went to school in Asia, I'd probably be dying too. We have it too good here. So dumb and spoiled. BUT KEEP GOING, SLAVE! YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

[rahhicecream]

Ugh poor Anthony! He's just a bit too late :( Great story!

[orangefriday]

Much too late :(

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment! Means a lot to me :)

[usrnamesarecool]

Argh, that was so sad but so perfect. It was just so real and so heartbreaking, and it actually hurt me to read, which is something that very few angst fics actually do. Amazing job!

[orangefriday]

Thank youuuuu!!!!!!! I just wanna say, that I really enjoy your tumblr and I always have a hell of a good time going through it and knowing how you are and what you're thinking. :)

[usrnamesarecool]

Awww, thank you! >w< I always feel like the most annoying person ever on Tumblr, so I'm glad at least someone finds my blog entertaining :P

[mutual_death]

If you could spread some talent over my crappy WriMo novel, even just a little bit, it would make it a lot less awful to read.

The realistic fics are ALWAYS the best ones and I can't think of anything more realistic than those that deny themselves the things they truly want in life...just to make someone else happy. And the way you wrote this was genius: the snippets of flashback bringing the reader to the present circumstances and to the ultimate realization--just as Anthony discovered it himself. So touching, simple, and REAL.

An epic fic of angst and emotion. and it ends in a way that you could definitely write a sequel. Though...the sadness comes from the unspoken doubt...a sequel may ruin that. Even though I'm greedy and will always appreciate more of your writing! ;)

[orangefriday]

Trust me, you have enough talent to fill the whole wide world. I'd give some though :)

I love realistic fics too! And I love writing them. And yes, I agree, a sequel might ruin it after all. I was thinking about one but the more I thought about it, the more complicated it got.

I hope you have fun editing your NaNo novel :P And if you ever need anybody to read it or rant about it, I'm here!