Smosh Fic: A little bit closer so it doesn't matter anymore

Feb 04, 2013 00:57


Title: A little bit closer so it doesn't matter anymore
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/OC
Genre/Warnings: Angst (but not my usual depressing crap - it's happy...ish. I tried, alright?)
Summary: Maybe he’s fucked up before - a thousand times - and maybe this is another fuck up but maybe it’s not.
A/N: I must love the theme of making ( Read more... )

smosh, one-shot, fanfiction, slash

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orangefriday February 4 2013, 22:48:02 UTC
I think that can probably describe 99% of everybody in the world. That tiny one percent are just lying.

Oh stooppppppppppp. But yes, I think this is my most anti-climatic/anti-dramatic fic I've done. I wanted something steady, something without anything in actuality. I avoided all the big things - all the big realizations and just focused on the moments before or after these life-changing events... to sort of draw out a sense that - hey, it happened, but did it really? can it revert back to whatever it was before? So yeah... NOPE YOU'RE NOT OVERANALYZING! I'm the one writing things that might seem freakin' complicated but I'm so glad somebody sees it! Yayayayay!!!!!

Here's a gif:


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orangefriday February 5 2013, 04:29:20 UTC
LOL YOU MAKE ME SOUND LIKE A DOMINMATRIX

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esprz February 4 2013, 23:22:56 UTC
And this story, much like your other ones once again reinforces my decision as to why you are one of my favorite authors. Yay, happy-ish angst!

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orangefriday February 5 2013, 04:26:49 UTC
Awwwww! Thank you! And lol @ happyish angst.

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ilovecheesebeca February 4 2013, 23:32:04 UTC
woohoo

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orangefriday February 5 2013, 04:26:19 UTC
Poopoo

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orangefriday February 5 2013, 04:28:39 UTC
The file size is probably too big. I hate when that happens for gifs I wanna use, especially on tumblr (but they increased the gif size so I'm happy now!)

I want to write more! But time is against me and also, I've got chronic writer's block. I'll have an idea, but it can't be translated into words.

But anyway, thank you so much for always reading my fics and leaving nice comments :) *hugs*

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michaelangelo24 February 5 2013, 06:06:14 UTC
I decided to stop boycotting any Smosh fic of yours that you tagged as angst and actually read this one. And I agree that it's not as angsty as your usual stuff, so you get an A for effort. :P

It's interesting to see a focus on mistakes that Anthony has made. Admittedly, I didn't know what half the mistakes were, but I don't think you wanted that to matter. It was just the fact that he did screw up. Lol, I'm starting to actually critique this like I would for class, so I'll stop. xP Let's just say that you had me when Anthony pushed Ian up against a wall and they ended up naked. Lol, me and my dirty mindset. xD

Now you should try pure fluff, although that might be almost as difficult as getting Sanjay to write smut. xD

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michaelangelo24 February 10 2013, 07:51:51 UTC
I will if you write that smut. ;D

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orangefriday February 16 2013, 18:37:45 UTC
SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT WHIP THAT PEEPEE OUT

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