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[fic] e x i t ; chapter 4

Jun 28, 2007 14:33

e x i t. ; SJ-various pairings
Author: taeik
Rating: R
Characters: Donghae, Hyukjae, Sungmin, Heechul, Jungsu, Shiwon, Hankyung, Yesung
Chapter: 4/?
Warnings: AU set in NYC, death, drama, cussing, you get the gist.
Summary: "It's down the hall and around the corner." "Thanks."

Previous chapters:
001 002 003

( I found it in my bag after I came home one day )

exit, super junior, fanfics

Comments 11

revvvolution_x June 28 2007, 23:04:23 UTC

I'm first??
Yah.
Nice chapter. Hankyung's all mysterious and whatnot. I'm loving it.
What Heechul is doing is quite cruel. I don't blame him that much though.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon. And your writing is wonderful.

taeik June 28 2007, 23:14:59 UTC

Thank you <33 :D
Yes, Heechul's cruel DD: but he doesn't like Hae cause of Hyuk, so.
Aah thank you again!~

scylladakylla June 29 2007, 01:58:46 UTC

Huh. o_o Very, very interesting. The fic's all disjointed but in a really cool way and I'm looking forward to seeing how it will all come together. Yay for Suju chapter fics, we don't get many of them. =D

taeik June 29 2007, 02:03:26 UTC

Thank you ^^; I can't really help but write that way = =;
<3!

scylladakylla June 29 2007, 06:01:56 UTC

Hehe, no worries, I actually love the style a lot, and I can never pull it off in my own writing because I tend to be too structured. XD ♥

taeik June 29 2007, 21:14:49 UTC

Ah really, I always seem to write like that because I'm not able to lengthen my ideas very well x_x; Thank you though! <3

quixoxotic June 29 2007, 03:07:30 UTC

WAH HANKYUNG

-drool-

OH THE SEXY.

taeik June 29 2007, 21:16:53 UTC

YES

SEXY 8D

bukkakeinureye June 29 2007, 03:45:02 UTC

Was Yehsung the one fawning over Hankyung, then? :D
If so...
dsfjk ♥

I really do love this fic, I can't wait to see how and what it all comes down to.

Can't wait till the next update. <3

taeik June 29 2007, 21:18:08 UTC

Aah it was Shiwon, sorry if it was confusing but I couldn't really seem to describe Shiwon & Yesung differently from Heechul's point of view there. x_x
eh...

Thank you for the comment!! ♥

this_is_cd July 26 2007, 07:51:07 UTC

This is really good! I'm all enthralled with it! I hope you DO continue! Don't get disheartened! Its REALLY good and complex! I love the way you;re writing it. It makes the reader pay attention and tie threads together. I can't wait to read more and see what happens! :D