Cherry Poppins

Feb 19, 2006 01:46

Title: Cherry Poppin’s
Author: Orangeplatypus
Disclaimer: not mine
Pairing: Hermione/Fred Hermione/??
Rating: NC-17 Adult
Summary: Fred has a question
Words: 698
Author's Notes: Second fanfic ever. First sex scene ever. Thank you everyone for being so nice! Not beta’d and I have bad grammar :).

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granger/weasley(fred)

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cosmo_jenny February 19 2006, 19:53:26 UTC
That line just did it.
The total anti-climax!!!
Fred thinking it was Krum *lol*

Great piece of fiction.
Jenny

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orangeplatypus February 20 2006, 09:24:08 UTC
Thank you so much, Jenny. I'm so happy it made you laugh.

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darth_kittius February 19 2006, 20:11:46 UTC
The last line is fantasic!

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orangeplatypus February 20 2006, 09:27:28 UTC
I LOVE your icon, also I have a cat we call Darth Mewo, reminded me of your journal name. Thanks for reading it, I'm glad you liked it.

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oops_pig February 20 2006, 00:49:52 UTC
I'm 100% certain that Charlie would be better in the sack than Fred anyday. Fred is one of those blokes whose all talk...

MMM... Charlie/Hermione in a garden shed! Me like!

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orangeplatypus February 20 2006, 09:28:09 UTC
I agree! However, I wouldn't want Fred to get a complex :). Thank you!

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apostrophe_ess February 23 2006, 22:12:36 UTC
Hehe! You're quite the master of the last line. Well done.

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orangeplatypus February 24 2006, 22:46:07 UTC
I love punch lines! thank you for reading, I'm glad it made you laugh!

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misconstrue March 2 2006, 20:15:49 UTC
I loved all the little twists and turns. XD

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