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[orangesky1212]

something happened

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[secretlife2006]

first off, im never going to get over your horrible editing and bad grammar (note last line of poem) secondly, i like it, cept the bird caged in a cell seems a little contrived for the poem a little like its trying to hard.
-Love you ^_^

[orangesky1212]

First of all, i don't remember writing or posting that...and Second...i have it edited in my file on my computer...and would like to show people that i'm kinda slow so i don't seem to pretentious....anyway i thought you died...

[secretlife2006]

first of all, no im not dead...close but no cigar. (whatever that means) and secondly, yes it is much much better ^_^ glad i could be of such service. anyways...whatever happened to the phone goes both ways huh?
-Loves

[orangesky1212]

you need to put out before that'll happen...just joking