{One-shot} Prompt table -- #30 Cake

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Comments

[annedee08]

adorable and hot~ XD
i want to see kame in a maid's costume XD

[orangeteadrop]

I want to see Kame in a maid costume too <333

Haha~ thank you for reading and commenting ^^~♥

[avery_averette]

Exhausted? Of course you are, a lot of 'hard' work went into it.

[orangeteadrop]

Errr ^///^

Thanks...? 8D;; *bricked*

[yukan_kat_tun08]

that was blazing hot!
love kazu's present

[orangeteadrop]

^///^

Glad you liked it~ It's Kazu's way of greeting Jin a happy birthday x)

Thank you for reading and commenting~♥

[kamewomezashite]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
yappari smut is my midnight snack!!!

[orangeteadrop]

Hahaha~ glad you enjoyed this one too ^^~♥

[paddyabroad]

hey there~ ^^
maido!kame-chan is one of the best b-day presents an Akanishi Jin could imagine ne XD I have yet to read the other fic you wrote before this, but you asked for errors to be pointed out... what I noticed, which is not an error per say, is the flow. Sometimes the sentences just to not run smooth... to me. I am not sure whether this makes sense to you and I think it is a hard thing to change, but worth working on as your ideas are cute ^^ as stupid as that sounds, especially talking... smut... reading out loud helps XD" Besides that, I think Kame would have liked some lube.

Alright, please ignore this comment if you just write for the fun and do not think it worth the effort, I can understand that too. Either way... nice one ^^

[orangeteadrop]

Oh yes, I kinda noticed that too, after my friend had pointed it out @_@

Thank you, all the same 8D

Although, I am trying my best in writing ^^;;

Thank you very much xDD