Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 9

[orchidluv]

This could probably benefit from another proof-reading (or two), but if I don't post it now, it won't get done for at least another day, so...

Nothing the Same, Book 4
Chapter:  9/?
Feedback & concrit: yes, please
Disclaimer: don't own them, never will, just having fun.
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Comments

[mulder200]

More importantly, you’re endangering Buffy when you insist on patrolling with her when you know you are ready.

The bolded part of the sentence could use "you're not ready" in it. It's amazing how rereading chapters makes me enjoy the story more.

[orchidluv]

Thanks! What a nice compliment.

Thanks for the catch. Got that fixed. *head/desk* nothing like a typo that completely changes the meaning of the sentence.

[anonymous]

Glad to see Tara around more. When I finally got around to checking out that episode guide I noticed "Family" was coming up pretty quick and I felt a little panic-ey about the events of that episode (which I only know second hand...) occuring without Tara having the support she had in canon...then I come read this chapter and find, to my joy, that she will.
I've always loved Tara. She and Willow are one of my top favorite pairings ever and I'm so glad you got that to happen despite everything. And the best part is with no trio likely to emerge...at least I hope not...I won't know until...well yeah.

Dawn's presence is starting to feel natural again...but I'm still concerned how Xander will react to someone he cares that much about being...well...ret-coned into his brain after his experence with memory spells. It'll be painful, I'm sure.

[orchidluv]

I'm with you: Tara was an amazing person. I really wanted to find a way to bring her in to this story and the magic shop seemed like the perfect opening. Tara and Ethan help fill the holes left by no Willow or Anya in the story.