Comments | orchidluv: Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 25

orchidluv

Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 25

Dec 27, 2009 15:21

Sorry - this is a week overdue, but things got pretty busy. However, it's a longer than usual and the next one is halfway done, so hopefully that will make up for it.
I hope you all had a good holiday season and will have a fabulous 2010.
-Caroline

Nothing the Same, Book 4
Chapter: 25/?
Feedback & concrit: yes, please
Disclaimer: don't own them, never ( Read more... )

s/x, nts book 4

Comments 12

mulder200 December 27 2009, 23:40:45 UTC

Mm. I just love Spike and Xander having kinky sex!

And I am glad the others were able to talk some sense into Buffy. Running away is not the answer here.

orchidluv December 28 2009, 16:26:15 UTC

Nothing like a pair of handcuffs to spice things up. *g* (even if it didn't work out quite like Xander planned.

rowanlyn_mirrim December 28 2009, 05:34:42 UTC

Humm, I wonder how differently that meeting is going to go... *grins*

TFW
K-

orchidluv December 28 2009, 16:27:51 UTC

Let's just say the Watchers haven't interviewed a master vampires' Claimed before. *g*

sentinelhuntres December 28 2009, 07:16:30 UTC

*salutes you with her coffee cup*
A kinky (the sex) angsty (when does Glory strike again?) cliffhanger (Quinton for a visit!?) update!
Love it ;)

orchidluv December 28 2009, 16:28:26 UTC

Thanks, hun. Next part is going well and should be up before the new year.

anyssia January 2 2010, 23:31:43 UTC

“Cell phones are for humans,” he said, glaring up at his Claimed.
“Apparently so are orgasms,” Xander threatened.
XDDDD Go Xander!!

“That’ll teach you,” Xander murmured, his voice slurred with sleep and boneless satiation.
Spike chuckled, the sound little more than a quiet rumble of content in the room. “Yeah, luv. Taught me good.”
I chuckled with him. So cute and hot!!

“You think they borrowed power from the Hellmouth for the spell,” Giles said in sudden realization.
“Stands to reason, don’t it? How do we know the spell will keep working once you take her outside the Hellmouth’s range?”
Oh, great point!! Didn't think about this O.O

Other than the zombies at the beginning of their senior year, Xander didn’t think anything had attacked Buffy in her home.Right, you would think something would have taken a shot at her at one time, but even the zombie were there for the mask and not actually Buffy. I wonder if she's not emitting some kind of 'safe place' mojo. You know, something that would blur the readings if somebody was ( ... )

orchidluv January 3 2010, 09:41:03 UTC

For some reason, I really struggled with this sex scene. It only finally worked when Spike turned the tables on Xander. But you know Xander, gotta have the last word anyway. *g*

anonymous January 3 2010, 17:32:49 UTC

Xander's anxious questions about Dawn coping was in marked contrast to Spike's nonchalance. It's a good thing she has both Xander and Spike in her corner, they balance one another out nicely. Both guys will keep an eye on her, but Xander is more in tune with her emotionally than Spike is. This key thing is a lot to handle and Dawn isn't going to be over it as easily as Spike thinks.

Xander's teasing was vivid and erotic and this gave me an unexpected laugh in the midst of the foreplay: “Cell phones are for humans,” he said, glaring up at his Claimed.

“Apparently so are orgasms,” Xander threatened. Trust Spike not to just lay back and take the torture ( ... )

orchidluv January 4 2010, 00:54:40 UTC

On some level, Spike just really doesn't get why the Key thing is such a big deal. Fortunately, in a weird way, it's what Dawn needs, someone who doesn't see her as even slightly different. Still, Xander's greater understanding is also very helpful. I really feel for Dawn.

Glad you liked Spike turning the tables on Xander's attempt to torture him. Xander should really have known that handcuffs wouldn't stop Spike. *g*