Nothing the Same, Book 4, Ch. 32

Mar 06, 2010 11:55

I'm back!  I had a great time and for three glorious weeks I didn't think about work or anything else.  Instead, I visited pyramids, entered tombs, admired hieroglyphics, visited temples, rode a camel, cruised the Nile, and generally lived in another world.  But, now that I'm back, the boys are talking again.

I posted the first part of this chapter ( Read more... )

s/x, nts book 4

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shakatany March 6 2010, 22:03:48 UTC
Glad you had a great time in Egypt *envious*

What a relief that Spike handled Xander's visit to the Knights so well - I was a bit worried.

What's up with Mr Olsen?

As always I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Shakatany

PS tiny typo: “Well he wasn’t wrong about that.” He pointed an accusing finger at the fading cut on his throat. “It was a dumb thing to do, Xander.” She unless Willow had a sex-change in a chapter I didn't read *g*

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orchidluv March 9 2010, 01:26:07 UTC
Thanks for the catch. I'll get that fixed, canon lesbianism is too rare to give Willow a sex-change operation. *g*

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mulder200 March 6 2010, 22:13:56 UTC
I loved this new/old chapter!

I love how Xander dealt with Spike's anger and diffused the situation. Yes, it was dangerous but he did gain information and possible allies.

And I admire how Willow was all concerned about Xander but really it's none of her business. Xander knows full well what Spike is all about.

Ah! Poor Dawnie! Xander is such a good, supportive friend.

And the ending? You evil tease!

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orchidluv March 9 2010, 01:27:48 UTC
*giggle* I'd love to pretend innocence, but the cliff hanger was always how this chapter was supposed to end. In a way, I guess it's good I didn't have a chance to finish the chapter before leaving for almost a month. That really would have been cruel. *g* More soon, promise.

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oneofaradia March 7 2010, 12:33:33 UTC
Ack! Okay, really glad that you're back and that you had such an awesome time in Egypt, but damn what a way to leave the story after such a long absence.

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orchidluv March 9 2010, 01:28:27 UTC
Sorry (kind of). More soon to make up for the way this one ended.

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sentinelhuntres March 7 2010, 14:34:40 UTC
oh can we see pictures?!!!
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Lovely update. I reallllllllllllllllly almost fell from my chair reading this "the survival instincts of a depressed lemming". *laughs*
Welcome back :)

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orchidluv March 9 2010, 01:29:55 UTC
I posted a few for you. Such a different world the desert is. I mean, I love rainy, green Seattle but the desert has its own kind of beauty.

glad you like the lemmings. *g*

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brunettepet March 8 2010, 18:09:47 UTC
I caught a couple typos in this chapter:

Fucking chainging you to the bed should be chaining

waiving at Tara as she stepped into the shop. She gave him a smile and a waive back - should be waving and wave

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orchidluv March 9 2010, 01:31:09 UTC
Thanks for the catches, I'll get those fixed right away.

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