This could probably use a final edit/proofread, but I want to post it tonight, so... Over the next couple weeks, I will be going back through Books 3 (because I started but didn't finish) and 4, proofreading, tweaking, and re-posting so the chapters are linked internally. No major changes, just a little clean-up. Then the series will be
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If I see any typos as I read I'll let you know.
I look forward to your next venture.
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I'm so grateful for all your wonderful feedback and catching my typos. I've made many many fixes due to you, and it makes any story more readable to not have typos breaking up the flow. I'll be going back through the rest of Book 3 and all of Book 4 to edit/link the chapters and do a little tweaking, so any catches will be gratefully appreciated.
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Things have been a bit tough for me so comments have been sadly few and far between, but I have not for a moment missed a single update nor failed to appreciate the incredible depths you have crafted into each event and character. It truly is a masterful work of art.
I'm sitting here with a big smile and a tears. You brought it full circle with the memorial and the visit to Jessie's grave. It really was IMO the defining moment in Xanders life, and the event that started him on he and Spikes journey.
You have made it impossible for me to nag at you for another book as you brought it to the perfect close. Yes there are still stories to be told after all Spike does get to choose the destination for their 200th.
You should be very proud of what you have accomplished.
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And I'm glad you enjoyed this wrap up, I did want to bring it back to the beginning for a nod to the start of all this - Jesse's death.
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Congratulations of finishing.
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Bringing Willow back to Sunnydale was a surprise, but very clever - she was there at the start, making magical mistakes and she was there at the end, having suffered and redeemed herself. Swapping her into Tara's place with the Glory mind thing was perfectly right for your canon.
The tension of the situation built beautifully and you tell a brilliant fight - your descriptions are so vivid, it's like watching them on the screen. In the fights with Glory, I could really believe that she was as strong as she was and their situation was so dire.
I love your imaginative explanations for some of the inconsistencies of canon, too, but the end and the epilogue - with Xander and Willow at Jesse's grave, and Xander and Spike in Hawaii, were wonderful. Congratulations again on completing such a thoroughly enjoyable epic.
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