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Sep 01, 2005 15:37

wringing cloudy
water from green rags
in brown buckets, sunim's
gentle voice echoes in my
mind's ear, reminding

me that i'm missing this chance
to awaken with the coarse wet fabric
between my fingers.

leaving no time to assign
emotion, i keep moving with the
noises, with the heat, with
the pervasive stillness
of all this.

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haiku for you flaphappy September 2 2005, 01:58:21 UTC
flap flap potato
here is a flapping for you
and a flap for me.

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Re: haiku for you ordinarymind September 2 2005, 03:13:15 UTC

yes! yes! flap that potato wing!

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glass_onion September 2 2005, 05:24:44 UTC
Hey...message me on AIM redchicken888 and let me know about the place.

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