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[ordinarymind]

lay upon this world
with your emptiness.
rest against this world
with all your emptiness.
it's a funny land of girls,
it's a painting full of bombs.
it turns to dust, but your emptiness remains.
often in the daylight
i'll emerge.
dizzy with my guts
left out all night.
they were searching
for you when i was unawake,
haphazard in that old dark sea of things.
and

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[princepriest]

is this a song?
i hear a melody
as i read these lines.

here is a handshake
and a hug from across
the vast expanse
of cyberspace.

normanoak

[ordinarymind]

dear normanoak,

what do you hear? i'd give a toe or two for a songwriting lesson with you. a strategic finger, even.

are your travels going well, your gardening? i hope to see you one day soon.

be well,
ryan

[ordinarymind]

i saw your brother last night. i never see both of you at once. i'm not convinced you aren't just one guy with two vastly differing personalities.

can't wait to play music with you tomorrow.