Comments | oreo_ornament: [Fanfiction] "Acebolado"

oreo_ornament

[Fanfiction] "Acebolado"

Mar 22, 2012 01:49

Acebolado
Rating: T
Characters: Brazil (Luciano)/Argentina (Martín)
Summary: Some BrArg requested by zulenha
( Read more... )

brarg, latin hetalia, oneshot, brazil, fanfiction, argentina, requests

Comments 8

vicucha_sc March 22 2012, 17:38:13 UTC

LOL "hace boludo" Martin I love you!! And I love Lulu too cause it's thanks to him I get to see this sides of Martin XD

oreo_ornament March 22 2012, 19:56:01 UTC

Thanks for reading! ♥

melissa_42 March 22 2012, 20:34:01 UTC

Bwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa your fics are always so clever! Everything about this is so awesome eeeeeeeeeeee I love how you write. o3o (I hope you weren't actually looking for a coherent comment)

oreo_ornament March 22 2012, 20:36:21 UTC

I MADE THE EFFORT TO WRITE COHERENT FIC
YOU NEED TO MAKE THE EFFORT TO WRITE COHERENT COMMENT

melissa_42 March 22 2012, 22:51:15 UTC

BUT IT'S HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARD

fine. It was quite a lovely snippet of fiction, and I especially liked the part where Martín was somehow able to squeeze his fat ass into Luciano's jeans.
THERE, ARE YOU HAPPY NOW?

oreo_ornament March 22 2012, 23:19:08 UTC

I am slightly more appeased. u _ u

zedille March 24 2012, 10:57:28 UTC

this was fun! hungover Martín really is amusing, isn't he? you really captured his personality in the narration, it came through loud and clear! and the whole thing with the pants made me smile :D

oreo_ornament March 25 2012, 03:26:14 UTC

Eeeeee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Tincho has a fun perspective to write from, for sure. Thanks for reading!