Darling, Look at the Sparks

[oriharaxizaya]

Fourth Shizaya fic I ever wrote. I don't really have anything to say beyond that.

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But you hold my attention without even trying;
A beautiful reflection from firework eyes.

“Let me go!” he begged. A bead of sweat trickled through his hairline as he kicked his skinny legs, attempting to flail his way to freedom. Mind you, this was completely

Comments

[infinitymax]

I knew I had found the right person on FF when I saw this on my friend's page. \o/

Absolutely amazing on how you captured Shizuo's thoughts so easily in this fic. <3

And pffft, I love Izaya right now so I'm just gonna head into the other room to laugh hysterically. XD

[reotterandfox]

Oh man, this was such a pleasant surprise ;~; I've been having the worst week, but this has definitely improved it :)

I love how twisted this is; how Shizuo thinks he's caught on to Izaya, but he completely misses a layer of manipulation. Izaya's such a weirdo... XD And you captured Shizuo's voice perfectly!

Another fantastic story, girl! :) Thank you for writing!

OTTERRRRR

[konspiracykid]

HELP ME. HOW DO I ADD THIS PERSON TO MY FRIENDS?! I MUST STALK HER EXCELLENT WRITING.

cannot...read....kanji....-sob-

Re: OTTERRRRR

[reotterandfox]

I was just about to help you out here, but then you go and figure it out for yourself! XD Well, fine then.

I LOGGED ON TO MY 18+ ACCOUNT FOR YOOOU~!! D:

but ILU anyway

Re: OTTERRRRR

[konspiracykid]

OHHHH SO THAT'S WHY THE NAME IS DIFFERENT.
Imma dork. HART YEW.

どうして漢字？？？？？

[konspiracykid]

ARRGGG I'M A FOURTH YEAR JAPANESE STUDENT AND I CAN'T READ ANY OF THE FREAKING KANJI ON YOUR PAGE.
But but but but I needed to tell you how amazing this was, even though it took me a few minutes to figure out how to post.
Umm....Not that I'm any good at expressing my words....PLEASE ACCEPT THIS GIBBERISH: dfsdiofhafaoisdfhaiosdhfkasdfhkasdfhiehfasdkfhajksd
Jeebus it was so cute. I just...aaughhh I love when people try to analyze the dynamic of their relationship. And "try" isn't even the right word in this case because you succeeded. And I'm sorry for my friend because she likes Izuo but I like Shizaya. I'm glad you had them randomly talk about it though. Lulllz.
Btw I'm curious...are you that person who wrote Love Blind Eyes? Your screenname is almost the same but it's not soooo I wasn't sure. Either way you are a great writer! And if I could figure out which button on here was the "add as friend" button, I would totally add you ;______;

.........Even if I knew what the kanji said I think they're too small for me to read, lol.

Re: どうして漢字？？？？？

[oriharaxizaya]

HAHAHAHA. YOU'RE CUTE. xD
i added you back.

truthfully, my kanji is terrible, so i only know what it says from translating it. :P

omgsh. thank you. i love gibberish. haha.

thank youuuu.

Re: どうして漢字？？？？？

[konspiracykid]

OHMIGAWSH. Thank you~~
I don't really know why I'm thanking you actually.
Or is it a thank-worthy thing to add people on here?
I'M AN LJ NOOB. @_____@

Mmyes I put thought into every letter....>____>

Not really, I'm lying.

Your icon is really hot. = w=

Awkward Stalker is Awkward

[konspiracykid]

Okay I probably shouldn't have said that I'm not really a stalker......

Anyway yeah I figured out you are the person who wrote LBE soooooooo you don't have to tell me you are....Um...not that you did in the first place. I'LL SHUT UP NOW, I THINK.

Sorry for spamming...last one.

[konspiracykid]

I also figured out how to add you....>___________>