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Apr 09, 2009 10:54

thinks that Twilight is pretty damn terrible. I mean, I wrote like this in, what, seventh grade? When does the PLOT start?

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floorlamps April 9 2009, 16:22:25 UTC
Plot? Who needs plot?

IT'S ALL ABOUT THE SPARKLES

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orinara April 9 2009, 16:24:38 UTC
I haven't gotten to that point, but Edward just hinted that he can't go out in bright sunlight. It's so rare that everyone is right about something, but in this case everyone who said this book is terrible was on point.

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pandoradeloeste April 9 2009, 20:08:38 UTC
It's not just terrible writing, it's downright dangerous. I keep bugging everyone who works with kids in my office that we need to hammer home that Edward is a freakish sociopath and his love for Bella is abusive and unhealthy. (We have to say it because there's a disturbing trend towards saying that Edward is SO ROMANTIC and they want a boyfriend JUST LIKE HIM.)

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orinara April 10 2009, 03:50:27 UTC
I got super creeped out. If I was Bella I'd have to be like stop following me, I don't care how good your breath smells.

("Sleep well," he said. His breath blew in my face, stunning me. It was the same exquisite scent that clung to his jacket, but in a more concentrated form. I blinked, thoroughly dazed. He leaned away.)

I almost DIED.

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