kiss 15 [smtown '08 aftermath]

Aug 17, 2008 23:24

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His heart is thundering, ears ringing with the rush of blood and the screams of the crowd that see them off the stage. He’s breathing heavily, whole body heaving with the effort of it as he sucks in oxygen. Adrenalin is pumping through him too though, and he’s riding a cresting high that makes him feel like he could touch the sky. The music ( Read more... )

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chaosmyth August 18 2008, 02:34:29 UTC
This was fantastic *______*♥♥♥♥

He ignores it all though, focusing on the taste of salt and Yunho under his teeth and the ragged breathing in his ear, the buck of hips and the slide of sweat soaked skin under his palm. It’s beautiful and brutal and just what he needs.

ashhjsgsdjkgksdjdfkjasfdjasdfsjad;hjadjagsadg;jdkgsgkdgah *DIES*

(and I'm loving the way this concert is inspiring JaeHo writers so much xDDDDDv)

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ara_niey August 18 2008, 03:20:10 UTC
yeah~
this is awesome!~

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rainysakura August 18 2008, 17:00:00 UTC
Wow, I'm impressed about how one video inspires you to do such intense writing like this. I really can feel the explosion of emotions of both of them in your writing... WOW.

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velcro_undies August 26 2008, 02:58:21 UTC
Guh. *dead*

You really captured that "moment in time". This seriously reads as if it was just a continuation of the video. Sometimes a PWP this short fails to build enough momentum because of its length, but this one most certainly does not. *slobbers*

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chloe1910 August 29 2008, 09:10:09 UTC
KGKSGHQEWGUYQEGUHDBKJANNVXNVKAJDHBAKJHQOQYHOGHQGDGDB!!!!!

SMTOWN FTW!!! God damn. I getting nose bleeding from Jae's and Yunho's smexiness on the stage....certainly fuel my Yunjae dream fantasy at night! *get smacked*

But BB, I think you pwns for writing all the kisses...aboslutely love every piece of them....please do continue...

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