kiss 16

[orionsroad]

Jaejoong clung to Yunho in his sleep, tucked snugly and tightly against the taller man’s body. Even in sleep, his grip was solid and hard to remove. Yunho didn’t mind, having long accepted and gotten used to the way Jaejoong was, only wishing there were something more that Yunho could say or do to make things better for his lover

Comments

[flufy_umbreon]

Oh, okay I kind of love this a ridiculously large amount ♥♥

I think you got the characterisation spot on, and the way you talked about Jae's psychological state of why he feels so inadequate felt so real.

love me love me love me please be happy please let me be enough please love me
Killed me a lot ;;; ♥

[orionsroad]

Aw, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think Jae must have days when he goes back home thinking 'wth is wrong with me'... he really seems like the type; so I hope the guys always remind him that he's awesome and that he's loved.

[kimbuibui]

it's moments like these when you realise the amount of pure love that Yunho has for Jae. And vice versa.

*wibbles*

♥

[orionsroad]

They need to support each other... even two very strong pillars need someone to lean on sometimes! ^_^

[chloe1910]

ah Loki bb..I love your Kiss series...

Honestly, Jae gives out the feeling that he's actually a very insecure person many times which makes this fic so real. This is turly beautiful and I oculd totally feel Jae's pain. I'm glad that Yunho is there for comfort and convince him of his worth...

Can I request for you to put the link to all the previous kisses in the final chapter? I would love to mem it and it'll be easier to reread them in future if all the links is in the same fic.

[orionsroad]

^_^ I'm glad you enjoy them so much.

Yes, I agree- I think Jae has a lot of self confidence issues, darling though he is. He's so odd sometimes, but we do love him for it! ♥♥ *snuggles the Jaepie*

... I don't know that there ever will be a 'final chapter' - these fics don't lead anywhere and don't have a plot. I just write them when something they do inspires me to write something. Though, if you want a quick way into all of them - they are all tagged in my journal under 'jaeho kiss bits' - so if you mem one, you can then click on the tag to see all the rest. ^_^

[chloe1910]

ah.ok. They I think I'll go and mem the first one...thanks!

[xxtranscendence]

This made me feel all warm and fluffy inside *huggles*
I always marvel the way on how you make the idea of 'YunJae' seem so sweet and beautiful~ Thank you for this awesome kiss bit, Loki ♥

[bao_bao]

*gives jae EXTRA love*