hello (oneshot)

[orionsroad]

Title: hello
Rating: PG
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1 615
Pairings: YunJae
Genre: Angst. D:
Summary: Sometimes, the worst nightmares Jaejoong has are the ones where he doesn't know if he’s still dreaming, or if he’s just awoken from a dream that spanned years.

A/N: Inspired by that interview that I'm sure you've all seen, where Jaejoong says he wants to

Comments

[vicshi]

yeahhhhh loki ;D
finally another non-AU fic from u *crushhug*
angsty too, i'm so happy
definitely mem-ing this <333

[joongielover]

heartwrenching. it feels so realistic because jaejoong just seems like that kind of person. soft and fragile when it comes to the band. i felt the same way when i watched that interview. i felt this empty, coldness; there's this urge to cover it up and tell him that everything will be fine. but no one knows what will happen; that's the problem. ah, i feel so.... ah. but i love this nonetheless ♥ :).

[ara_niey]

ahh~
i've watched that interview..
he was really honest and can't help but feel for him..
i don't want the day of them being history to ever come too~*sigh*

[blurmeese]

first:

“I don’t want to get married. I don’t want to buy a big house. I don’t want to have kids. I don’t want anything to change. I don’t want… anything but this.”

I actually started tearing up at that line, it just shows you don't need fancy metaphors or elaborate words to get across something like that, that line is just...heartbreaking. Just like the rest of this fic, really, maybe because there's just too much realness in your writing. Jaejoong is a terribly hard character to get right but you've stripped him down so well here, right up to breaking point and my god it's just amazing to read, the feelings, the wants. Memming this.

[_happy_as_rain_]

Oh wow, I really like this. How it begins and ends with them dreaming. The pain, the fear. Really wonderful character exploration. So violently personal. Beautiful ♥