Oh, this is so wonderful! Really. So simple, yet so beautiful in its simplicity at the same time. I will definitely be looking at more of your stuff soon. :)
This was just delightful, I enjoyed it so much! I was going to start quoting parts, but the whole thing was great - funny and poignant at the same time.
You could've quoted the entire thing and I would have been thrilled. =D Honest. funny and poignant That just makes me feel very warm and happy inside as it is exactly the style of writing I want to have. I'm glad I hit the right notes for you. Thank you so much. *adds*
Aww, that was so perfect. I must say I'm absolutly in love with Lily in this. She's so spunky and awesome. This was such a fun read, and I have so much trouble focasing on het. All the characters were wonderfuly written. Great job!
Secret: Lily is my absolute favorite character to write. This is just the first time I've finished with her as a major character. Thanks, glad you liked!
Have I told you lately that I love your WwE universe? And this fits in with it so nicely. I particularly liked your James and Lily. They are perfect. And there are just enough hints to show Frank and ALice's personalities! Brilliant!
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I love that Frank and Alice's relationship isn't perfect and that James wants to try and do better even if he doesn't quite know how. Beautiful. :)
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*adds as friend*
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funny and poignant
That just makes me feel very warm and happy inside as it is exactly the style of writing I want to have. I'm glad I hit the right notes for you. Thank you so much.
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Thank you! :D *adds back*
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Glad you liked Lily and James and that I was able to get Frank and Alice's personalities across right. :D
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