Yea Verily

May 12, 2007 23:06

1977: Auld Lang Syne

Summary: It's 1977, and the first war is about to begin. The Order is founded. The Death Eaters are recruiting. The Marauders are graduating. People fall in love. People marry. People die. Everyone has a story to tell. Remus/Sirius. Alice/Frank. James/Lily

Rating: PG-13

Words:8,589

A/N: This is a very ambitious project, and I'm not ( Read more... )

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callie_girl May 13 2007, 07:39:47 UTC
Oh, this is good. This is really really good. You hit the nail on the head. Everything I love about all these characters. And I laughed at 'Pendleton.' :)

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orngsnapdragon May 19 2007, 03:03:56 UTC
=D! I'm glad you liked. I was really worried about some of my characterizations (And I hope you don't mind my shameless filching of Pendleton- it fits so well.) Oh, there was also an editting problem and about the last half of the fic was in white type and thus unreadable unless highlighted, just in case you didn't see that. XD

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nomicitacita May 13 2007, 10:02:11 UTC
great start! I can't wait to read the rest....
I loved the contrast between the adult world of Frank and Alice and the 'child' world of the Marauders, it will be great seeing them transition from the one to the next

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orngsnapdragon May 19 2007, 03:06:53 UTC
Thank you! The rest will be coming soon eventually. I didn't actually realize I had that contrast until midway through my last draft, but I'm pleased you picked up on it.

Oh, and, almost all of the last half was accidentally posted in white type, so you may not have been able to read it.

Thanks again!Mind if I add as a friend?

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kardia May 13 2007, 16:04:05 UTC
ambitious, yes, but this is an insanely good start. your writing has perfect flow to it and your characterisation is incredible. can't wait to read more! :)

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orngsnapdragon May 19 2007, 03:13:25 UTC
=#) Oh, now I'm blushing. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoying. And, in case you didn't realize, pretty much the last half was accidentally in white type. XD

Mind if I add as a friend?

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kardia May 20 2007, 08:35:15 UTC
i noticed, but 'select all' is no bother ;)

added you right back!

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solesakuma May 14 2007, 01:03:21 UTC
I really liked the absolutely different New Years and the feeling that the 'happy world' is going to crash soon.

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orngsnapdragon May 19 2007, 03:15:07 UTC
=D Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. (And I hope you noticed I had, er, oh-so-cleverly managed to put the last half in white type. XD)

Mind if I add as a friend?

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solesakuma May 19 2007, 06:18:53 UTC
I'm not ashamed to say that I hadn't... well, I am.
I've got to say I love your Alice.

And no, I don't mind it if you don't mind a few posts in Spanish that go unstranslated because they're catharsis. I'll friend you too!

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segatakai May 14 2007, 04:56:00 UTC
Wow, the witty banter between the Marauders was absolute perfection.

I can't wait for the dynamic between Remus, Sirius, and everyone else to evolve -- this was the best fic I have read in a long time.

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orngsnapdragon May 19 2007, 03:19:07 UTC
I'm not sure which makes me happier, you calling the banter witty or perfection. Either way I'm ecstatic. Thank you so much for your comment! I', glad you enjoyed, and in case you didn't notice I accidentally put the last half in white ink. ><

Mind if I add as a friend?

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