Oh wow, That last line was so scary. This was adorable, I love baby fics and Neville baby is espeacially cute :) Very nice in deed, thanks for the post :)
Very nicely written. I really like the rhythm of it, how the narrative just flows along. (Augusta's little bit of dialogue, though random amongst the narrative, still fits really well... I'm very glad you kept that piece in)
The presents were wonderfully descriptive of the givers. large blue teddy bear ::snort::
and yes, that last line... so very effective in its sudden change of tone.
I'll go cry now...
No, actually, one more thing. There a bits in here that have inspired me! (ie the Prewitts being Frank's Best Friends, Augusta and her duelling circuit...) Would you mind terribly if some day they show up in some of my fics? I'm beginning to think that the Frank/Alice community is small enough that we shall eventually create our own, collective canon. I, for one, swear by lyras's Augusta.
Aw. )= I didn't mean to make you cry. But I am glad you enjoyed- and that Augusta's line of dialogue was appreciated. (Hee hee, giant blue teddy bear. Somehow R/S manages to infiltrate everything.)
No, I wouldn't mind at all. =D I would actually be absurdly pleased. And God knows I've already stolen "Pendleton" for Alice's maiden name.
The A/F community is getting bigger, I think, and I've done some poking around and found some older stuff that proves we're not the first ones. But, yes, collective canon would be made of win.
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This was adorable, I love baby fics and Neville baby is espeacially cute :)
Very nice in deed, thanks for the post :)
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Very nicely written. I really like the rhythm of it, how the narrative just flows along. (Augusta's little bit of dialogue, though random amongst the narrative, still fits really well... I'm very glad you kept that piece in)
The presents were wonderfully descriptive of the givers. large blue teddy bear ::snort::
and yes, that last line... so very effective in its sudden change of tone.
I'll go cry now...
No, actually, one more thing. There a bits in here that have inspired me! (ie the Prewitts being Frank's Best Friends, Augusta and her duelling circuit...) Would you mind terribly if some day they show up in some of my fics? I'm beginning to think that the Frank/Alice community is small enough that we shall eventually create our own, collective canon. I, for one, swear by lyras's Augusta.
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No, I wouldn't mind at all. =D I would actually be absurdly pleased. And God knows I've already stolen "Pendleton" for Alice's maiden name.
The A/F community is getting bigger, I think, and I've done some poking around and found some older stuff that proves we're not the first ones. But, yes, collective canon would be made of win.
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